Put Christ back in Christmas.
Just a holiday?8 total reviews
Comment from Poetic Friend
Aussie, I agree with you wholeheartedly. Some people get caught in the commercialism of Christmas, and never stop to think about the true of meaning of the holiday.
In some societies, they don't want to connect religion with the Christmas. Sad, so sad.
I love your rhymesof the sound "ay" and the meaning within.
Good luck in the contest, my friend.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Aussie, I agree with you wholeheartedly. Some people get caught in the commercialism of Christmas, and never stop to think about the true of meaning of the holiday.
In some societies, they don't want to connect religion with the Christmas. Sad, so sad.
I love your rhymesof the sound "ay" and the meaning within.
Good luck in the contest, my friend.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much for reading and appreciating the real meaning of Christmas. The World needs the Lord. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Mimi Linny
Very nicely done ABC poetry piece with a lovely theme. The flow of the poem is smooth and creates for an easy read. The last sentence summarizes its feeling beautifully. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Very nicely done ABC poetry piece with a lovely theme. The flow of the poem is smooth and creates for an easy read. The last sentence summarizes its feeling beautifully. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Hello Mimi, Thanks so much for reading, glad you liked my poem. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
It is sad that so many people want to take Christ out of Christmas. Maybe it's because the holiday has become so much more about the glitz and glitter and less about Him,
~patty~
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Hi there;
It is sad that so many people want to take Christ out of Christmas. Maybe it's because the holiday has become so much more about the glitz and glitter and less about Him,
~patty~
Comment Written 10-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2017
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Hello Patty, Heartily agree with you. Thanks for reading and appreciating the real meaning of Christmas. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Sasha
Very nice work with this one. I especially like that you used all the letters in order, including the last line. I prefer this way, but I know the rules say the last line can begin with any letter. Excellent entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Very nice work with this one. I especially like that you used all the letters in order, including the last line. I prefer this way, but I know the rules say the last line can begin with any letter. Excellent entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Thanks so much for reviewing. Tis the season to celebrate His birth.
Comment from Liberty Justice
SIX STARS for you, dear poet. Your photo is so festive and colorful. Your poem has a great meaning telling people the true meaning of Christmas and asking people to keep this day in a holy manner. WELL DONE! lol liberty justice
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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SIX STARS for you, dear poet. Your photo is so festive and colorful. Your poem has a great meaning telling people the true meaning of Christmas and asking people to keep this day in a holy manner. WELL DONE! lol liberty justice
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Hello friend, Thanks so much for agreeing with me over the celebration of His birth.
Comment from patcelaw
Aussie, this is not an ABC poem it is an acrostic poem Just thought I would let you know as it will be disqualified. It has a good message and one we should all remember at Christmas. Patricia
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Aussie, this is not an ABC poem it is an acrostic poem Just thought I would let you know as it will be disqualified. It has a good message and one we should all remember at Christmas. Patricia
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Gosh, I must have been in a hurry, oh, well that's life. Thanks for reading and picking up the mistake - big one!
Comment from Cleo Belle
A powerful message - well done for writing this. I would have liked to have seen more about the importance of Christ in our lives and the power and depth of this.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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A powerful message - well done for writing this. I would have liked to have seen more about the importance of Christ in our lives and the power and depth of this.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Thanks Cleo, He lives in our hearts, it's a poem not a story my friend.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Hi Kay! You have written a lovely Christmas poem here, and would be perfect for a Christmas poem contest. Christmas is a special time, a time of love and remembering what the meaning of Christmas truly is. Beautifully written my friend. ) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Hi Kay! You have written a lovely Christmas poem here, and would be perfect for a Christmas poem contest. Christmas is a special time, a time of love and remembering what the meaning of Christmas truly is. Beautifully written my friend. ) Sandra xx
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Congratulations on your second place. Apparently, I wrote the wrong format (acrostic instead of ABC) oh, well, such is life!
