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Comment from Pearl Edwards
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Congrats on the win for this 5-7-5 Nature poem Barb. Nature certainly does put on quite a show in dark and light, beauty and might. Well done,
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017
    I am honored and I thank you so much for the great reivew
Comment from Tier V. King
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Good morning, Barbara: Wow, congratulations. I see that you have won first prize for this contest. This is terrific and it is a great 5-7-5 poem. I agree, beauty could seem hidden but it will always seem in plain sight. One cannot hide beauty. I love your rhyme scheme. Wonderful!

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
    All we have to do is look in the light and the dark to find the beauty. Thank you so much
Comment from Mustangpatty1029
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Congratulations on your win!

This is a great five-seven-five Nature. You did a wonderful job, as always. Thank you for sharing, and congratulations again,

~patty~

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
    I am honored as I thought lthere were others that truly rocked the subject. Thank you so much
Comment from l.raven
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HI Barb, CONGRATULATIONS on a great win sweet girl...you even make a short poem have a big meaning...people just don't look what is in nature...some do...but not most...nothing to do today...take a walk...it's better than some of the movies out today...very nicely written my sweet friend...and I love the picture...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    wow I didn't know and I thank you for letting me know. I never thought it would even place and I am thrilled. Thank you so much
reply by l.raven on 06-Nov-2017
    then I am so happy for you...ssoooo welcome...love xxoo
Comment from pbomar1115
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Some people are a natural when it comes to a poetry of all kind and you are. Nature 5-7-5 is confusing to me. However, I think I have the image you are expressing, but I count 4-6-4 lines in the poem.

Phillip

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    I rechecked and got 5-7-5, I think it is all in the part of the country and the pronunciation we use. thank you so much for the very kind reivew
reply by pbomar1115 on 06-Nov-2017
    I don't know anything about the poems.
Comment from sandy montgomery
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Excellent 575. No spag. Beautiful presentation. Great "satori". "nature has such might ". I like "beauty shows in dark and light " because it amplifies "hidden in plain sight" which is a great opwning line. Well done. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your work.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    Thank you so very much for the great review. I don't do short ones well but I still try
Comment from Elizabeth Daniels
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Your poem is both correct and eloquently written. We often miss the beauty of nature right in front of us. I like the rhyming scheme as well. Elizabeth Daniels.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    All we have to do is look around. Thank you so very much
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi, Barb

= Awesome artwork to complement your excellent 5.7.5 entry.
= I like the title. Much of the beauty in nature is hidden in plain site.
= Good luck in the contest.

= Cheers, J
= Have a good day/evening!
(*>*) Remember--A Smile Is A Frown Upside Town (*<*)

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    All we have to do is look, right? Thank you for the encouraging reivew
Comment from Bucketlist
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So many poems, so little time! I enjoyed your 5-7-5 about nature. The title had me thinking it was about the male species LOL . I am supposed to tell you what I didn't like
........,, and what was incorrect grammatically ..........
I hope that helped.
Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    wow thank you so much for your supportive review, dear friend
Comment from S. Pumpkin
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This is an excellent entry for this contest. I love how you point out the importance of nature, something we too often miss in our busy lives. Great 5-7-5. I wish you all the best in this contest too.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
    Need to smell the roses.lol
    thank you for the great review