My Halloween story.
A short story about what Halloween should be and should not18 total reviews
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Ine.
A great contest entry and I wish you luck.
We never had Halloween in Australia either, but here, in the Philippines it is huge.
All the kids dress up and go trick or treating. It's been fun for me to watch.
Working day and night is bad for our health, you are correct.
Great job.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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G'day Ine.
A great contest entry and I wish you luck.
We never had Halloween in Australia either, but here, in the Philippines it is huge.
All the kids dress up and go trick or treating. It's been fun for me to watch.
Working day and night is bad for our health, you are correct.
Great job.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Many thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.
Comment from Joan E.
Your Halloween poem is certainly too scary for children, but the description of the celebration is quite complete. I am sorry you had a hard day and night, but I liked the picture you selected. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Your Halloween poem is certainly too scary for children, but the description of the celebration is quite complete. I am sorry you had a hard day and night, but I liked the picture you selected. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Many thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great last part of the week.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I had issues this week because of my co workers but I usually love Halloween. It's fun for the kids. One of my favorite Halloweens was when I worked at the daycare. I was in high school still and I was able to get out of school to help get lunch together at the daycare. It was so fun to put together, and teach the kids how to put the weird food together. Great job
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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I had issues this week because of my co workers but I usually love Halloween. It's fun for the kids. One of my favorite Halloweens was when I worked at the daycare. I was in high school still and I was able to get out of school to help get lunch together at the daycare. It was so fun to put together, and teach the kids how to put the weird food together. Great job
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. You got it. Have a nice start of the week tomorrow.
Comment from Dutchie
Hi Ine. Very well written Halloween story. It's very interesting and your poem was really scary. I never liked clowns, It all started last year and hope they don't come back.You did a great job, but yeah,probably Dean will win again. We don't celebrate Halloween here, so it's brave you wrote about it and you did it very well. Fia xxx
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Hi Ine. Very well written Halloween story. It's very interesting and your poem was really scary. I never liked clowns, It all started last year and hope they don't come back.You did a great job, but yeah,probably Dean will win again. We don't celebrate Halloween here, so it's brave you wrote about it and you did it very well. Fia xxx
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. You got it. Have a nice start of the week tomorrow.
Comment from Rasmine
Robina,
I give you a six for effort. Yeah, Dean will probably win, or Hitcher. Or perhaps not. We will see. I entered that contest, too. I know I won't win, but it is still fun to enter and read everyone's poem unless it is a CEC contest. Wait -- I don't think I did enter because the computer is dying. I wish you all the luck!! I will post mine when I get the new computer.
Nome
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Robina,
I give you a six for effort. Yeah, Dean will probably win, or Hitcher. Or perhaps not. We will see. I entered that contest, too. I know I won't win, but it is still fun to enter and read everyone's poem unless it is a CEC contest. Wait -- I don't think I did enter because the computer is dying. I wish you all the luck!! I will post mine when I get the new computer.
Nome
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. You got it. Have a nice start of the week tomorrow.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Ine. Yeah Dean always wins ... it's almost a shame to put anything against him cause he is so good! I liked both the poem and the story. Well done you. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Hi Ine. Yeah Dean always wins ... it's almost a shame to put anything against him cause he is so good! I liked both the poem and the story. Well done you. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. You got it. Have a nice start of the week tomorrow.
Comment from c_lucas
Ghosts and goblins set the scene for many evil acts. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very very good imagery.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Ghosts and goblins set the scene for many evil acts. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very very good imagery.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. You got it. Have a nice start of the week tomorrow.
Comment from sunnilicious
You're hilarious, Ina. I commend you for trying and telling the truth just adds nicely to the whole story. Great visual imagery created. Creative. Fun. Seasonal. Nicely written. Let us pray they keep you in... Good luck :)
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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You're hilarious, Ina. I commend you for trying and telling the truth just adds nicely to the whole story. Great visual imagery created. Creative. Fun. Seasonal. Nicely written. Let us pray they keep you in... Good luck :)
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. You got it. Have a nice start of the week tomorrow.
Comment from Ronni
Thanks for sharing your Halloween story here, providing some very
interesting historical background on the celebration of Halloween
which I had never seen or read before, so I appreciated your enlightenment
on this event.
Did a great job on your scary poem....well suited for the event...and
and kids liked it no doubt too.. they don't 'scare' too easily anymore.
Best wishes,
Ronni
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thanks for sharing your Halloween story here, providing some very
interesting historical background on the celebration of Halloween
which I had never seen or read before, so I appreciated your enlightenment
on this event.
Did a great job on your scary poem....well suited for the event...and
and kids liked it no doubt too.. they don't 'scare' too easily anymore.
Best wishes,
Ronni
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. You got it. Have a nice start of the week tomorrow.
Comment from l.raven
Hi Ine, Halloween was slow again this years...I think it won't be long and it will just be private parties for the kids...it's to dangerous anymore...I love your poem sweet girl...and love your story told...very well written...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Hi Ine, Halloween was slow again this years...I think it won't be long and it will just be private parties for the kids...it's to dangerous anymore...I love your poem sweet girl...and love your story told...very well written...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. You got it. Have a nice start of the week tomorrow.
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your so welcome Ine...and you have a nice start to the week as well...xxoo love
