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I Believe

I have faith in God That He protects me.

13 total reviews 
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Liberty. Congratulations on winning the contest with this wonderfully expressed faith poem and your author's note. Rhyming and form are very good. I wish you the very best and hope you DO sell a million copies of your books. Marilyn
Typos:
lightening (lightning)
and
half the night,
That God Eases my sufferings (half the night. That God eases)

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
    Thanks for great rating and for wishing me good luck in the contests.
Comment from lyenochka
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Thank you for sharing this strong statement of faith in this poem. I like the bold, capitalized "I BELIEVE" which starts each stanza and how each part covers areas in life which requires faith. I also pray before driving/riding. Glad you recovered from your accidents.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

    Thank you for your kind words and great rating.
Comment from Sharon Meda
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A good spiritual poem.
The message is clear and forceful. Well done.
We all need something to believe in and your faith is strong.
Sharon

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
    Thank you so much Sharon for your inspirational reviews on both of my poems. Good luck to you, also.
Comment from Ellie707
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NICE PEACEFUL SCENERY.

THIS PERSON'S OPEN ABOUT EXPRESSING THEIR FAITH. THEY BELIEVE THAT GOD IS NOT ONLY THEIR FATHER, BUT PROVIDER, PROTECTOR AND THAT GOD CARES FOR THEM.
I LIKE THE ENDING:

TRULY,
I BELIEVE.

I BELIEVE WITH THEM.

I ENJOYED THE JOURNEY.

ELLIE

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
    Thanks Ellie for your great rating and inspirational review on I BELIEVE. Glad you enjoyed my 2 contest entries.
Comment from dragonpoet
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This free verse uses repetition to enhance your emotions about your faith. This poem defines what faith is meant to be for all of us. Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
    Thanks for wonderful review and lovely stars.
reply by dragonpoet on 04-Nov-2017
    Don't mention it.

    dp
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
    Thanks dragonpoet for your good wishes to me in the contests.
reply by dragonpoet on 05-Nov-2017
    You're welcome.

    Joan
Comment from Aussie
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Fantastic photo to compliment your beliefs. God is always at the tiller of our boat, steering safely away from the rocks. So many suffer because they won't listen to the still, small voice within. We love because he first loved us. Well done poet. "Without faith it is impossible to please God." Bible.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
    BEAUTIFUL! You have made my day. My day was otherwise dreary and so lonely, since I have no one to love and no one loves me; but, now I feel like my poetry has value and somebody believes in me. If only people would check out my two books. Thank you so very very much!
Comment from Dean Kuch
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There is nothing we can possibly do in our lives that God won't forgive if we would but simply ask Him to.
We are His children, and children are prone to make mistakes.
I BELIEVE He understands this and doesn't expect us to be perfect. However, God does expect us to learn from our mistakes and ask His guidance in assisting us to never make the same mistakes again.
He's always there for us if we need Him.
Best of luck to you in the Faith Poetry Contest.
~Dean

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
    Thanks Dean! You gave me such a glowing and inspiring review. I see that you, too, BELIEVE!!
reply by Dean Kuch on 04-Nov-2017
    Yes, I most certainly do, Anonymous.
    You're more than welcome.
    Good luck! :)
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
    Thanks Dean so much for your lovely review and spiritual and inspiring comments.
reply by Dean Kuch on 04-Nov-2017
    You bet. :)
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
    Thanks for your good wishes to me.
Comment from jaded831
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Your words of faith are a comfort and speaks of what faith should be. I relate to your poem, because every stanza reflects my own heart. My only complaint is I think you need more of a contrast between your background and font. On my computer the words almost blended into the background, I had to strain my eyes just to read the words.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
    Thanks Jade. I will take care of that, right now.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Your belief is something I really admire and the joy you feel here is joyous and sentimental. Not sure God can help you to sell your books, but I wish you luck, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
    You're so sweet, Dolly! Thanks for great review. Perhaps you have some ideas on publishers, ways to sell.
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 04-Nov-2017
    Talent sells without any effort it seems, best of luck, love Dolly x
Comment from mmonaghan777
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This is a wonderful recognition of what the Lord can truly do for you. Last line used the word "if". Never live in what if land. Your whole poem said "I Believe" and then you finished with "if".

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
    Oh, thanks for lovely stars. You are so observant, and I will edit.