Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hi Everett. I have to say I couldn't decided if you were for or against skinny women. lol. Usually it is crystal clear, but in your case, it was not. I do like the format though. Take care. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017

I'm for all women Kiwi just not for those with lofty opinions of themselves to the point where they feel uncomfortable with those below their perceived status as human beings. Thanks Kiwi. tom

reply by kiwigirl2821 on 03-Nov-2017

Thanks Tom. Oh yeah I like it much better now. I'm the same with men. I'm for all men. I love everything about them regardless of all the fluffy and foo foo or is that hunky and God like? :) xoxo Kiwi

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem. A very delicate subject choice. Women who have everything their hearts desire are often cold as ice and mean to others less fortunate.

Typo in title
The poor do not adolre(adore) the rich or do they?



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 Comment Written 03-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017

Thank you Sandra for the review and for the fix. I am honored. tom

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks why we adore Waspy women, Anglo-Saxon pride, tiny but committed to faith in God, maybe they are little in number as per species, poor may not adore, but others do; I liked.

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 Comment Written 02-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017

Hi ALD. Thank you so much for this nice review. tom