Fret Not My Child
Why we should not fret.15 total reviews
Comment from brenda faye curtis
Patricia, this poem is beautifully inspirational. After many trials in my own life, I have come to accept that these events occurred because the were supposed to, and it may take years for me to understand why, if I ever do. I can still take solace in the fact that it's all part of God's plan.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Patricia, this poem is beautifully inspirational. After many trials in my own life, I have come to accept that these events occurred because the were supposed to, and it may take years for me to understand why, if I ever do. I can still take solace in the fact that it's all part of God's plan.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Brenda.
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You're welcome, my friend.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a beautiful poem. The message is clear and strong.
Yes, there is much we must pass through, both good and bad. Faith will lead the way.
It has good rhythm and rhyming.
Well done.
Sharon
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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This is a beautiful poem. The message is clear and strong.
Yes, there is much we must pass through, both good and bad. Faith will lead the way.
It has good rhythm and rhyming.
Well done.
Sharon
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the lovely review, Sharon.
Comment from jaded831
How comforting, your words flow into me, and I feel calm. Like sipping on a fine wine, my troubles just disappear. But unlike fine wine the feeling is lasting. I am grateful everyday for my faith, and you who keep that faith alive.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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How comforting, your words flow into me, and I feel calm. Like sipping on a fine wine, my troubles just disappear. But unlike fine wine the feeling is lasting. I am grateful everyday for my faith, and you who keep that faith alive.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the lovely review, Jaded.
Comment from zanya
Yes a salutary lesson for us here in these stanzas with regard to life's journey and its many 'trials' - if only we can trust in a Higher Power taking care of our needs 'fret not'
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Yes a salutary lesson for us here in these stanzas with regard to life's journey and its many 'trials' - if only we can trust in a Higher Power taking care of our needs 'fret not'
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the kind review, Zanya.
Comment from Heather Knight
When my daughter was sick as a little girl, I was lucky because the terrible suffering never made me question my faith.
Your poem reminded me of that moment in time.
Luckily she's okay now and enjoying life to the full.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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When my daughter was sick as a little girl, I was lucky because the terrible suffering never made me question my faith.
Your poem reminded me of that moment in time.
Luckily she's okay now and enjoying life to the full.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the kind review, Maria.
Comment from Sasha
Please do not misunderstand. I think this was well written and conveys to most comforting message. I am still at the stage where I don't understand God allowing so many to go through such horrific pain, difficulties and other such things. You don't need to respond to this. This is a question I need to deal with on my own. Still a nice job with this one and I am sure one day I will agree.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Please do not misunderstand. I think this was well written and conveys to most comforting message. I am still at the stage where I don't understand God allowing so many to go through such horrific pain, difficulties and other such things. You don't need to respond to this. This is a question I need to deal with on my own. Still a nice job with this one and I am sure one day I will agree.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the kind review, Sasha, I am not sure why God would allow us to suffer. But with His allowing me to suffer, I have spent more time with Him in his word.
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
All children have to journey through the trials and tribulations of life and we should all try and make their journey as safe as possible and you have written of the ill paths they may tread but offer hope, excellent Patricia.
Mitchell
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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All children have to journey through the trials and tribulations of life and we should all try and make their journey as safe as possible and you have written of the ill paths they may tread but offer hope, excellent Patricia.
Mitchell
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the kind review, Mitchell.
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for interpreting the Psalms in these rhymed quatrains. I admired your speaking in the voice of the Lord and your reference to "sisters" and "brothers". I enjoyed your embedding the title in your art. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thank you for interpreting the Psalms in these rhymed quatrains. I admired your speaking in the voice of the Lord and your reference to "sisters" and "brothers". I enjoyed your embedding the title in your art. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the kind review, Joan.
Comment from sandy montgomery
I was touched by this piece. I've been struggling with some things lately and reminders like this are such a blessing. Thank you for sharing your faith and thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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I was touched by this piece. I've been struggling with some things lately and reminders like this are such a blessing. Thank you for sharing your faith and thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the kind review, Sandy.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wise faithful words here Patricia and this is one of my favourite writes of yours, a treasure indeed and I will remind myself of these words when someone is evil to me, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Wise faithful words here Patricia and this is one of my favourite writes of yours, a treasure indeed and I will remind myself of these words when someone is evil to me, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the kind review, Dolly.
