The Past
Our memories keep the past alive4 total reviews
Comment from MissMerri
An excellent poem, one that says quite a lot in just ten words. I've been thinking about this very theme lately, as we buried my brother-in-law on week ago today, and spent much time remembering and sharing memories of his amazing life. You have said it well.. "The past, never really gone." I wish you much luck in this contest. MM
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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An excellent poem, one that says quite a lot in just ten words. I've been thinking about this very theme lately, as we buried my brother-in-law on week ago today, and spent much time remembering and sharing memories of his amazing life. You have said it well.. "The past, never really gone." I wish you much luck in this contest. MM
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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Thank you MissMerri. Condolences on your loss. The loss of a loved one is never easy. May he remain in your hearts forever and be an angel watching over the family.
Blessing and Peace,
Brigitte
Comment from Ogden
A observation so obvious and simple, undeniable, stated matter-of-factly, in just ten words, as required by the contest rules, gets my vote, and deserves it, because it's the best!
Good luck in the voting!
Don (aka Ogden)
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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A observation so obvious and simple, undeniable, stated matter-of-factly, in just ten words, as required by the contest rules, gets my vote, and deserves it, because it's the best!
Good luck in the voting!
Don (aka Ogden)
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much. I am humbled by your review.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Memories last for but a moment in time before all is lost and unless it's in black and white and recorded, it has gone forever, that's why we poets should keep penning our thoughts! Lovely truthful words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Memories last for but a moment in time before all is lost and unless it's in black and white and recorded, it has gone forever, that's why we poets should keep penning our thoughts! Lovely truthful words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thank you for this kind review. You are a faithful fan friend.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from rspoet
This is an interesting poem of the present and past
Nicely done, but only nine words and you need ten words
We always seem to live in the present
even though it is quickly part of the past
and those memories are essential
Excellent picture to go with your words
Just add a word. Good luck in the voting
RS
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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This is an interesting poem of the present and past
Nicely done, but only nine words and you need ten words
We always seem to live in the present
even though it is quickly part of the past
and those memories are essential
Excellent picture to go with your words
Just add a word. Good luck in the voting
RS
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Oops.... I will. Thank you so much for this helpful review. You are a faithful fan friend.
Brigitte
