Logging in
Online invitation. Shut it down.8 total reviews
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good morning, Poet: This is so true and in only ten words you have summed up most if not all the negativities of logging in those pain in the but, online invitations. We all have to be so careful that we do not allow our curiosities to trap us or lead us down that unnecessary road. There is also too may scam artists online. Great job!
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Good morning, Poet: This is so true and in only ten words you have summed up most if not all the negativities of logging in those pain in the but, online invitations. We all have to be so careful that we do not allow our curiosities to trap us or lead us down that unnecessary road. There is also too may scam artists online. Great job!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from kathleenspalding
Excellent ten word poem flows well and delivers a true and important message about the dangerous things that kids can get into online. Excellent use of artwork, font, and colors. Great job!
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Excellent ten word poem flows well and delivers a true and important message about the dangerous things that kids can get into online. Excellent use of artwork, font, and colors. Great job!
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2017
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Thank you for the great review.
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You're welcome
Comment from webfoot
Yes, you have nailed it. The "logging in" experience has a very dark side. Sometimes I think it would be good to go back to "pre-computer" days even though they have made our lives easier in some respects.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Yes, you have nailed it. The "logging in" experience has a very dark side. Sometimes I think it would be good to go back to "pre-computer" days even though they have made our lives easier in some respects.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
Okay, I just have to tell you that I didn't get this. At first, I thought you were talking about abortion, but then I saw your description: 'Online invitation. Shut it down.' I just have no idea.
I'm sure it's probably me, but I just didn't get it. Good luck!
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Dear Mystery Writer,
Okay, I just have to tell you that I didn't get this. At first, I thought you were talking about abortion, but then I saw your description: 'Online invitation. Shut it down.' I just have no idea.
I'm sure it's probably me, but I just didn't get it. Good luck!
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reviewing. It refers to those being radicalized via the internet.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Exposure to online bullies and pedophiles are a constant threat to the young and require close monitoring by parents to protect our children, a profound poem here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Exposure to online bullies and pedophiles are a constant threat to the young and require close monitoring by parents to protect our children, a profound poem here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Samantha perron
Loved this. Deep, creepy and has meaning that can be interpreted in a few different ways. The background really accents the dangers of the internet. While the bright colors also draw you in, which is exactly what it does. Well worded, great job!
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Loved this. Deep, creepy and has meaning that can be interpreted in a few different ways. The background really accents the dangers of the internet. While the bright colors also draw you in, which is exactly what it does. Well worded, great job!
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ten word poem. Today's technology makes it very easy for hate groups to recruit vulnerable people to join their cause. We have to be very careful who we befriend on the internet.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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A very well-written ten word poem. Today's technology makes it very easy for hate groups to recruit vulnerable people to join their cause. We have to be very careful who we befriend on the internet.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Dean Kuch
"Innocents terminated"... there aren't too many "innocents" left in the world, save for children, Anonymous Poet. And once groups like ISIS, the Ku Klux Klan (oh yes, they're still around, believe me), or Al Qaeda gets a hold and molds their impressionable, young minds, their innocence is compromised as well.
The internet has made it very easy to form an alliance with rather seedy groups such as these.
Best to stay away, and to inform your children of the dangers as well.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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"Innocents terminated"... there aren't too many "innocents" left in the world, save for children, Anonymous Poet. And once groups like ISIS, the Ku Klux Klan (oh yes, they're still around, believe me), or Al Qaeda gets a hold and molds their impressionable, young minds, their innocence is compromised as well.
The internet has made it very easy to form an alliance with rather seedy groups such as these.
Best to stay away, and to inform your children of the dangers as well.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the kind review.
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Anytime...
