Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi DD,

I always look forward to reading your poems.
You always write such beautiful ones.
I haven't been feeling very well lately.
I hope I'll be able to keep writing more.

Kat

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thank you Kat. I appreciate your review on my short poem. Please take care of yourself and don?t overdo things so your body can catch up. You?ll feel better in no time. Thinking of you. ~DDxx

Comment from Nika2016

Excellent

Such a tiny poem that says so much....about life
about love and the imprint
it leaves on a soul...
This is the good touch...
opposed to that war brings...
very nice...

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017

Thank you so much Nika. Your review on my short poem is much appreciated. There are some people who we will never forget. Enjoy your weekend. ~DD

Comment from Ellie707

Good

I CAN'T FIGURE OUT THE PICTURE, BUT THAT'S JUST ME.

I LOVE THE POEM SHOWING HOW MUCH HE/SHE CARES FOR ANOTHER. THE USE OF IMPRINT IS A STRONG VERB THAT CONVEYS THE DEPTH OF FEELING.

NICELY PUT!

ELLIE

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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017

Ellie, thank you for your review. However, in order for me to understand the four stars you awarded - I would appreciate your suggestions on where the adjustments are needed - as per the Fanstory guidelines for reviewing. It is not the picture that needs reviewing but the short poem content itself.

Six Stars (Exceptional: Simply Outstanding)
Five Stars (Excellent: Enjoyable and no revisions needed)
Four Stars (Good: Adjustments needed)
Three Stars (Below average)
Two Stars (Below Average: Needs lots of work)
One Star (Poor: Major revision required)

If there are no adjustments needed please amend your rating accordingly. Thank you. ~DD

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

You've said a lot in so few words. Your poem is nicely composed and illustrated. Some people do touch our souls forever whether friendship or a love relationship. Marilyn

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017

Marilyn, Thank you so much for your review on my short poem. It is much appreciated. There are some people who we will never forget. Enjoy your weekend. ~DD

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Ooooh, this is cute :) I'm not sure what the exact rules of this contest are, but you definitely painted a scene in my mind with this short poem. I can feel my heart skipping a beat from my own past experiences. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017

Thank you so much Joy. Your review on my short poem is much appreciated. There are some people who we will never forget. Enjoy your weekend. ~DD

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

Ooh, now that's heavy, so deep! Your photo is so dynamic and displays the inner pain of a heart. Metaphoric way of saying the heart will love someone forever. BEAUTIFUL! LOL LIBERTY JUSTICE

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017

Liberty Justice, Thank you so much for your review on my short poem. It was much appreciated. Some people we just never forget. Enjoy your weekend. ~DD

reply by Liberty Justice on 04-Nov-2017

You're so welcome, PoemsofDD for my review. lol liberty justice

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Oh! This is gorgeous, in every possible way. I can't believe you managed to convey so much emotion in only twenty syllables. This is the contest for which my poem is lost, but after reading this, it doesn't much matter to me. *smile* No way my silly (but fun) poem would have stood a chance against this one. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017

Thank you Dawn. I appreciate your kind comments. Have a fabulous weekend. ~DD

reply by Dawn Munro on 04-Nov-2017

You're very welcome. You too. :)

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

This poem may be short as far as word-wise goes, but it is long in message and that's what counts.
Wonderfully well done, DD.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017

Thank you Dean. It is always a pleasure to hear from you and to receive you comments. I always enjoy your animations and creative sign offs. Thank you for the smiles. Have a good weekend. ~DD

reply by Dean Kuch on 04-Nov-2017

Anytime, DD...
~Dean :)

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, DD

= Beautifully written short poem for the contest about love and how strong it can be when it's right.
= Great impact, with cool artwork. Good Luck.

Cheers, J
Have a good day/evening!
A Smile Is A Frown Upside Town (*>*)

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017

Thank you Jax for your review on my short poem. As always, your comments are much appreciated. ~DD

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

When one thinks of another and the heart skips a beat, the feelings are forever etched in ones mind. This is so truly stated

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017

Thank you so much Barb for popping in to review my short poem. Your comments are very much appreciated, as always. ~DD