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Child's Play?

Can you imagine your children playing here?

3 total reviews 
Comment from Liberty Justice
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WOW! Such a dynamic warning about toxic waste. Some adults should warn children. Your poem is short sweet and powerful warning about dumping wastes. People don't often realize dangers. Good luck competition. Just viewed listing and you got my thumbs up. After contest ends tell me who you are. lol liberty justice

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2017

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    Thanks so much for your response and vote! I was pleased with my 2nd place. Elaine
reply by Liberty Justice on 06-Nov-2017
    I'm so happy for your win! lol liberty justice
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your lowku about the disgusting situations facing too many children. I wonder how this would go down in any American neighborhood. Or, are working parents too busy to notice?

Well done,

~patty~

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2017

reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
    I did not enjoy writing about this awful situation but it was challenging. Thanks for reading.
Comment from beizanten
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poor oblivious children, may I ask what country is this. The picture fit the poem, showing the threat to children health.


A simple short yet well written and straight to the point poem and mention a serious issue

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2017

reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
    Not sure of the country--but it is a sad depiction for children. Thanks for responding.