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Pawprints

Pet poem 5/7/5

3 total reviews 
Comment from BeasPeas
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They are gorgeous dogs. A nice 5-7-5 expressed well for this cute and "aristocratic" breed of dogs. Much luck in the contest with this worthy entry. Marilyn

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
    THANKS FOR READING AND CRITIQUE ZANYA
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem about the paw prints the little dogs leave in the heart. You used very good descriptive wording. great notes and great art work. Best wishes in the prompt! Teri

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
    Thanks for reading and critique zanya
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Oh, such cute puppies!! A truly delightful poem, perfectly composed within the specific syllable count, and the use of 'aristocratic' to describe King Charles Cavaliers was truly inspired. Good luck in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
    Thanks for reading &critique zanya