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"The Gift of Life II"

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Comment from mmonaghan777
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Truly beautiful. As each day comes we keep the truth alive
the Lord has never given us anything to keep so that as we need we also share.
Thank you for sharing your world.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
    Thanks this was both difficult and beautiful to create crafted truly from the valve thanks dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Ricky, that was an incredible thing to write about your dear son and what his death did to save others. I believe wholeheartedly in organ donors, and I think the law should change to say that instead of opting into donor your organs, you have to opt out. It saves doctors the heartbreaking job of talking to the family immediately after they have lost a loved one about an organ donation. And, that way so many more lives could be saved. Bless your heart, my dear Ricky, you and your son are angels. Sandra xx

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
    You're so important facts and information on organ tissue donations that you may like to know first off if you call one eight hundred donors one and ask for La Ras Moretti Moretti she's a friend of mine and she will give you any information you need to know she'll send you a bumper sticker to risk being in pain if you want to hand them out and promote organ tissue donation she might send you a package like she does me secondly he was an important fact on how bad it is out there for people waiting in the year 2014 in the tri-state area of Delaware Pennsylvania and South Jersey there was over 4,500 people waiting in hospitals for kidney donations all those people will get to go home okay but only 99% will be going home the other only 1% will be going home or less the other 99 plus I'll be going home and body bags to be buried or cremated so will my SunPass 58000 people were waiting for the gift of life in the form of an Oregon United States today it's approaching 200,000 sew-in 14 almost 15 years it just it's more than doubled people don't understand the odds of something like that happening to them is very rare extremely but I'm going to try and get on Kelly and Ryan Seacrest and promote my gift of Life pork I'm going to try and get it published through the door and then I'm going to go on that show if I can with Lara and then part of my program Wake Up Shake Up which is to make people aware on this planet of ours about life thanks for your review doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from MJ McIntire
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This has two sides, it is heartbreaking that you lost your son. Then the joy that another life was saved.
It must be bitter sweet that you had a son and he was taken from you but you must also be proud that you brought a child into this world who is responsible for saving another child's life.

MJ

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
    first so in this situation came about over 14 years ago March 31st my son had never signed his driver's license when when he was basically pronounced he was still alive and breathing but he was brain dead so if you decide to donate okay and get involved with these people it's a process of questions papers you will be charged or your insurance company will be charged for the removal of the organs but it is in credited it's just customary I don't understand that part I was told that my husband's hospital bill alone just for medication to try to stop this horrible incident was over $20,000 just for medications so that doesn't include other bills so he never signed the driver's license he's only 18 how many 18 year olds make that decision they're not thinking about death and I think about life but it is about life also but it's not about their particular situation being where they're going to be involved in a life-and-death saving situation in an accident which they have no control over so I'm a spokesman for the Philadelphia I'm trying to get on the Kelly and Ryan Seacrest show in the morning to ABC Studios and promote my gift of Life Book and talk about this with Bart Lara should talk about organ tissue donation like in the year 2014 almost 4,000 people in tri-state area Delaware Pennsylvania South Jersey and hospitals were waiting for the kidney human kidney they all get to go home but most of them and body bags unfortunately when Jason passed away 58,000 waiting for the gift of life in the form of a human organ in the United States today is approaching or may have approached 200,000 so it's getting worse so I talk about it publicly I've never made a speech on it and I have written poems about it and it gave testimonies about it in Latter Day Saints churches in New Jersey and Philadelphia one day if I decide to compete again that would make a nice subject in a nice piece to compete with of course cuz it's very very powerful not just a grieving part of it but the donation part so thanks for your kind review dr. Ricky tin 24
Comment from DonandVicki
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A very moving story and I can always feel your passion in your writing. You have a way of pulling the reader into your true stories using your passion. Don and Vicki.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
    Thanks Donald so spiritual and religious pieces I've written very very many they are not coming basically threw me they're coming from above first to me and then afterwards I filter it through my mind and bring it forth it's just a gift that was given due to the tragedy and loss over 14 years ago my son and wife you'll see another one on the 5th of November much more deeper All My Sons would be 34th birthday thanks dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Mabaker
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Okay, Ricky here goes. I wasn't confused at all reading this and the unfolding story it told, rather grateful you posted it. That must have taken great love for Jason to donate his organs. There have been a few lately doing it. Great story. Regards Mabaker

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
    Thanks ma Baker that was not written by Me was written basically above and then filter down in through me it's just a gift it might be hard to believe but to write 22 deeply beautiful religious one two and three slammed poems based on that subject of religion and 1575 Haku and 5 Seconds within a 30 minute. After taking the sacrament in front of two missionaries females from France after being titled is incredible it's a gift due to the loss of my son and wife who passed away 8 months after my son's death in a car accident she couldn't handle the grief and she stopped her medications and died from the second heart attack so on the 5th of I'm passed away so on November 5th my son was born in 84 so you figure out how old he would be in heaven I will write another one dedicated to him put it on this site and also Facebook so be sure to follow up and enjoy that one from about thanks dr. Ricky 1024 later
Comment from emptypage
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Sad in so many ways, Ricky, but the triumph is in that gift of life your son left behind...
and in the gifted hands God gave those doctors....
and in the medicines created by the best brains God could fine to stave off infection and rejection.
Thank God for Jay.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
    Thanks a lot for your time and beautiful review empty page dr. Ricky 10247
Comment from visionary1234
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Ricky, this is so sad - a beautiful story you have given us here, and one if particular significance to me personally as I just lost a wonderful friend a few weeks ago. He was granted 5 extra years of life because he received a total lung transplant. I see you have heard the critique before, but it is worth repeating: you need to carefully EDIT your work, so it will SHINE my dear. Something that is filled with spelling errors, typos etc is really distracting from your wonderful story. Please! Go back and give it the polish it deserves. I would be happy to re-rate.
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 Comment Written 02-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
    Thanks I did pick up the errors and corrected it they were all done because this was fancast and written into a cell phone dr. Ricky tin 24
Comment from JDRBAR
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The idea of what you are trying to say comes across, but there are so many nits that I cannot in good conscience give this any higher of a rating. Using a spell checker and grammar check would be most helpful.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
    those so-called Knicks are my style I emphasize sentences that are important are words okay the grammar it's perfect that was checked when spell check okay and then you talk about nits then if you see problems with it that you think are grammar you should post those they can be corrected this is on the front page and the welcome page is the number is number one on in the welcome page right now through fanstory if they thought that it wasn't worthy because a grammar and I definitely wouldn't put it up there the content is wonderful in the in the preferences of what it was all about was also see you should realize that is reviewer dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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God bless you Ricky you have been through so much may god bless and keep you and you will be reunited with your loved ones quicker than you think, the time flies by so enjoy your life as your family would want love Meia xx

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
    thanks Mia I just had a review from somebody with 4 stars because he said that you should check it over it would have spell check cuz it's too filled with knits I said I don't know what time it starts on the welcome page in the very first position okay it's already garnered 6 star reviews and 5 Star reviews and then to four star reviews from people that are idiots but they don't realize that I preface in the reason behind the writing even the editor's notes but you do and thanks as always talk to Ricky 1024
Comment from Walu Feral
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G'day Ricky.

Very touching stuff, mate.

Personally, I think it should be almost mandatory to be an organ donor when we die. We have no use for perfectly good organs then, but others, especially kids, could sure use them.

Well done.

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
    Thanks very much the Walu Feral.. Dr.Ricky 1024