Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Warm
Blood running free
Leaving life
Cold

I copy and pasted this Kahpot onto my review page so I could read it over a few times to correlate it to an antonym
An antonym according to the dictionary is a word that means the opposite of another.

Cold
blood congealing
staying with death
Hot

Is this what you mean the opposite of.? sorry I am a little lost But i am sure there is the perfect answer

dip

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017

Thank you very much, I agree but I did look up and warm-cold are also opposites I was trying to say when blood is bleeding life away life becomes cold (dead) thank you for an honest and questioning review****kahpot

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Great job with this antonym poem! Warm and Cold are antonyms but what is surprising is that the warmth is the blood "leaving life" (good alliteration) and the lack of blood leaves the body cold. It's dramatic for such a short poem.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017

Thank you for a very understanding review as that is exactly what I was going for****kahpot

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

I wasn't even aware that there was an Antonym Poetry Contest coming up, kahpot.
Now I know.
Warm--Cold.
Pretty obvious choices.
You done good.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017

Obvious is me and I am glad I done good, now that you know I give you the O.K to kick my ass, thank you for the humor my Freind, many thanks****kahpot

reply by Dean Kuch on 01-Nov-2017

I won't be entering the contest, kahpot.
You're safe from me. :)

reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017

It was meant to be humorous my Freind

reply by Dean Kuch on 01-Nov-2017

It was. :)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks what is left behind and the wars message reminds the state of the soldiers who are dead in the battlefield, most of them are lifeless and cold state of living everywhere; I liked.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017

Thank you very much and thank you for understanding****kahpot

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

You have managed to tell a complete story is just a few words. Nicely done. Your poem is a great example of what poetry should be. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017

Thank you my Freind this is very inspirational for me****kahpot

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

A very good Antonym Poem.
A lot said in a few lines.
Strong meaning. Well done.
The picture is incredible.
Good luck with the competition.'
Sharon

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017

Thank you very much****kahpot

Comment from Ronni

Excellent

A very tense, tormenting, war message, leaves no ambiguity of horrors of war,
nor leaves imagination without precise, painful and fatal imagery. Great pic
choice for theme and message. Thanks for sharing.
Best of luck in contest. Ronni

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017

Thank you very much, this review gives me a lot of confidence****kahpot

Comment from apky

Excellent

I can only wish you well for this antonym
that you have chosen for the contest.

The way you write about blood running free,
leaving the life cold, fits perfectly with the
current Halloween frenzy mingled with horror.

Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017

Thank you very much, I never thought of that (Halloween)****kahpot

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting Antonym poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

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 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017

Thank you very much****kahpot