Comment from Oatmeal

Exceptional

ROBINA1978,

Short and sweet...just like I like them! This poem made for an enjoyable read.
The line count is correct. Telling things very plain and comprehensible. The theme was well thought out. The artwork complements your poem.

There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. You got it. Have a nice start of the week tomorrow. Nice to see you again. But I have to look after hubby first,

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

Very nice to meet you! Also I like your short poem because you can see that your happy words are matched by your happy picture. I too am one half of a lovely couple...married for 38 years. Good luck to you in the contest, and thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. You got it. Have a nice start of the week tomorrow.

Comment from Dutchie

Exceptional

Such a lovely poem Ine. Yes you are a lovely couple and always were, when I look at this picture. A short sweet poem and I love it, I love the simplicity. Fia

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017

Thanks for this kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week. And another!!

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

You're a very loving couple. And I've seen your faces before. Or did I dream it... Lolz. Nice presentation. Let pray that love always run deep into infinity. God bless y'all. Nice work.

I hope you can enjoy some candies... Happy Halloween!

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017

Thanks for this kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week.

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Ine, very creative my sweet friend...you did a great job sweet girl...I hope and pray Robert is feeling better...it's a beautiful picture...very nicely written you...love ya Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017

Thanks for this kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week.

reply by l.raven on 01-Nov-2017

your so welcome Ine...and you have a great second part of the week as well...xxoo love

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Oh Robina, this is lovely and now we know what you both look like.Thanks a lot for sharing this. It's a lovely wee poem you've shared with us here. Thanks a lot for that. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017

Thanks for this kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for sharing your picture of yourself and Robert in this composite--it is very creative. I enjoyed your twenty-syllable poem as well. Best wishes in the contest, and I hope your husband is recuperating well- Joan

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017

Thanks for this kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Love crosses all boundaries, gender and age, love is real and alive and is worth gold to to many, I loved your simple, but poetic and profound words, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017

Thanks for this kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week.

Comment from Ronni

Excellent

Thank you for sharing photo and congrats on the many years together....
must be doing something right! By all means, keep it up, and many
more happy years ahead wished for both of you.
Best always, Ronni

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017

Thanks for this kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week.

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Ine - what a lovely poem - short and sweet. And I love the idea of the picture of you and Robert. How did you manage it - you clever girl? You had a great idea. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy xx

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017

Thanks for this kind review, Ine. Have a great second part of the week. Trial and error.