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Afternoon Stroll In The Park

Biographical reverse nonet

17 total reviews 
Comment from brenda faye curtis
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This reverse nonet is a wonderful poem, and an effective way of reminding us all to cherish those we love while they are still with us. I enjoyed it very much.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
    Thank you for the nice review, Brenda/
reply by brenda faye curtis on 04-Nov-2017
    You're welcome.
Comment from Teri7
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Patricia, This is a very well written and beautiful reverse nonet you have penned. You used very good wording and the picture of you two is great! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
    Thank you for the nice review, Teri.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Wonderful memories Patricia of the long years you had together and life throws a spanner in the works on occasions and we have to say our last goodbyes, but you have these photos and your memories, a beautiful tribute here in your nonet, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017
    Thank you for the nice review, Dolly.
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi, Patricia;
The picture depicts two people still in love after many years of marriage. I can only imagine the pain you feel as you navigate the days without your best friend and partner. Thank you for sharing these thoughts,

~patty~

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017
    Thank you for the nice review, Patty.
Comment from Poetic Friend
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Patricia, dear, my condolence on your loss. Your love for each other shines through this beautifully written poem.

I like the reversal of the nonet format lovingly presents this union of thirty-seven years. You definitely have the answer to a happy marriage.

Thank you so much, dear Patricia.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017
    Thank you for the nice review, PF
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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I do believe you have two sixes my lady otherwise this has a wonderful memory of a true love. YOu never forget, I have never forgotten my love that was taken from me in 1967

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017
    Thank you for the nice review Barb.w,
Comment from lyenochka
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Thank you for sharing your beautiful memories. I'm sad to read the last line of "in just a while things have all gone dark." You still keep it alive in your memories and in your writing. Blessings.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017
    Thank you for the nice review, Helen.
Comment from Joan E.
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I don't imagine you will ever stop missing Wayne's smile and company. Thank you for sharing one of the last photos of the two of you and another tribute to your life with him in this nonet form. Warm regards- Joan

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017
    Thank you for the nice review, Joan.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Patricia,
This is a great reverse nonet. Good job on its style. You & your Wayne look so happy in the picture. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017
    Thank you for the nice review, Jan.
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Patricia,

Your husband and you look wonderful.
I enjoyed the picture of you together.
It was nice to see his wonderful smile.
And how happy you looked with each other.

Kat

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017
    Thank you for the nice review, Kat.