Specks
Pet peeves. Number 1.17 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh no don't give up! You got me hooked into the cleaning bug! I find cleaning very satisfying but then when the family arrive and you're back to square one it is disheartening! I loved your little poem about cleaning, I was skipping along with you dusting and vacuuming! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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Oh no don't give up! You got me hooked into the cleaning bug! I find cleaning very satisfying but then when the family arrive and you're back to square one it is disheartening! I loved your little poem about cleaning, I was skipping along with you dusting and vacuuming! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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Thanks for reading, Dolly. I enjoyed your review very much. :)
Comment from patcelaw
Living in the desert we have a lot of those wee specks floating in the air. They do in time light on any flat surface and will collect till I can no longer stand seeing them. It is then they get the brush off. Patricia
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Living in the desert we have a lot of those wee specks floating in the air. They do in time light on any flat surface and will collect till I can no longer stand seeing them. It is then they get the brush off. Patricia
Comment Written 28-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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Thanks for reading, Patricia. And for telling me about your own experience.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the battle against the dust specks. Before you done the last room they already gathered again. It is like a never ending story we do it tomorrow all over again.
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A very well-written poem about the battle against the dust specks. Before you done the last room they already gathered again. It is like a never ending story we do it tomorrow all over again.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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Never ending is the perfect word... Argh!
Thanks for reading.
Comment from Dean Kuch
I gave up a long, LONG time ago, Maria.
You're never going to get rid of every spec of dust in your home. At least I assume it's dust you've personified here. You never came right out and actually stated that.
Hey, we all have our pet peeves. Mine is dirty dishes left in the sink and all over the house. It's like people are afraid they'll melt if their hands get wet.
Jeezus...
~Dean
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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I gave up a long, LONG time ago, Maria.
You're never going to get rid of every spec of dust in your home. At least I assume it's dust you've personified here. You never came right out and actually stated that.
Hey, we all have our pet peeves. Mine is dirty dishes left in the sink and all over the house. It's like people are afraid they'll melt if their hands get wet.
Jeezus...
~Dean
Comment Written 28-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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Yes, it's dust, Dean.
I didn't say it, you're right. I kind of did it on purpose. ;)
Thanks for reading.
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I hope this helps.
~Dean :)
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Yeah. It makes perfect sense now. Thanks.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A cute and funny poem.
At the same time I've chased those specks myself. The ones you see in the rays of sunlight. They drive me crazy.
Well written, love the picture.
Well done.
Sharon
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A cute and funny poem.
At the same time I've chased those specks myself. The ones you see in the rays of sunlight. They drive me crazy.
Well written, love the picture.
Well done.
Sharon
Comment Written 28-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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I'm glad you enjoyed this, Sharon. Thanks for reading.
Comment from DR DIP
This is exactly what I meant about your ast write Maria you last write was different to your normal style I was not saying it was not good.
This was a fun write personifying dust like that. I think everyone could relate to your poem. Thanks for sharing this fun write.
dip
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This is exactly what I meant about your ast write Maria you last write was different to your normal style I was not saying it was not good.
This was a fun write personifying dust like that. I think everyone could relate to your poem. Thanks for sharing this fun write.
dip
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Comment Written 28-Oct-2017
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Thanks, Mark. Unfortunately it's easy to relate to this. I hate dusting!
Comment from oliver818
Nice poem. I like the flow and rhythm of it. The imagery is nice too. I especially enjoyed the end. Thanks for sharing this poem and have yourself a really great day
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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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Nice poem. I like the flow and rhythm of it. The imagery is nice too. I especially enjoyed the end. Thanks for sharing this poem and have yourself a really great day
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Comment Written 28-Oct-2017
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You too. Thanks for reading.
