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short (20 syllable) poem contest entry

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Comment from dragonpoet
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Congratulations on placing second in the contest with this wonderful concise poem
about the awesomeness of nature. Sunrises and sunsets can be so beautiful.

Keep writing.

Joan

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017
    Thanks Joan :-)
Comment from Sharon Meda
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Well done. A good twenty syllable poem.
It's not easy to print suck a clear picture with so few words but you have done it.
Good luck with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    Thanks Sharon :-)
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Oh of all the ones I read, this one is very profound and I love the emotion I get from reading it. Makes one wonderwhat they are missing

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    Thanks Barb :-)

    I used to think I was hallucinating when I would catch that rare light. . .until one day, I finally just had to ask some else if they saw it too! I don't know why, but it never fails to enrapt me!
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Ah very nice Leineco
I agree with what you are saying about the beauty of the sunset and the sunrise of how it gives me a different feeling and yes, takes my breath away
Gert

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    Thanks Gert :-)

    I used to think I was hallucinating when I would catch that rare light. . .until one day, I finally just had to ask some else if they saw it too! I don't know why, but it never fails to enrapt me!
reply by Gert sherwood on 06-Nov-2017
    You are welcome Leineco
    You add me in seeing as you call it rare light.Will write about it.

    Gert
Comment from Joy Graham
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It's tou to make a scene come to life in so few words. I love it when somebody sneaks that moment in before I get a chance to protest or complain lol! You did it. I can only thank you for helping me experience it. I love the picture and your message. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    Thanks Joy :-)

    I used to think I was hallucinating when I would catch that rare light. . .until one day, I finally just had to ask some else if they saw it too! I don't know why, but it never fails to enrapt me!
Comment from frierajac
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It is a fine submission to the contest. I 'm sure that it is a universal sentiment and may persons are participating in this very idea as it is written. It seems almost like
a haiku in intention.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    Thanks FJ :-)

    I used to think I was hallucinating when I would catch that rare light. . .until one day, I finally just had to ask some else if they saw it too! I don't know why, but it never fails to enrapt me!
Comment from rama devi
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I enjoyed this. Love that light too! I am used to reading longer works from you. You did great capturing a tone and tenor in few words. Lovely presentation too. Lovely imagery. Nice meaning and AHA effect. A moment waits to catch your eye is nice...but adding and breath is so effective. Bravo!
Good luck

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    Thanks Rama :-)

    I used to think I was hallucinating when I would catch that rare light. . .until one day, I finally just had to ask some else if they saw it too! I don't know why, but it never fails to enrapt me!
reply by rama devi on 06-Nov-2017
    Me too!!!!
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written short poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    Thanks Teri :-)
Comment from RodG
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This little poem says so much about how Natural light can affect each one of us. It can startle or awe and leave us speechless. I say all that in two sentences; you say it more eloquently in 20 syllables.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    Thanks Rod :-)
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi, Lorraine

= Beautifully put in words, and gorgeous artwork as well.
= Indeed, there is that special time of the morning and night that is stunning.
= Here in the desert, it is lovely looking out over the lake, and London Bridge.
= Good luck in the contest.

Cheers, J
Have a good day/evening!
A Smile Is A Frown Upside Town (*>*)

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2017


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
    Thanks J :-)

    I used to think I was hallucinating when I would catch that rare light. . .until one day, I finally just had to ask some else if they saw it too! I don't know why, but it never fails to enrapt me!