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A student infactuation.16 total reviews
Comment from Mabaker
Oh, dear sweet Alie I love your poetry. It is just like you honest and fresh thank you for being my mentor. Yes with your gentle nudges I became a better writer, though I can't write poetry. Love U Anne.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Oh, dear sweet Alie I love your poetry. It is just like you honest and fresh thank you for being my mentor. Yes with your gentle nudges I became a better writer, though I can't write poetry. Love U Anne.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
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Awwww thanks so much.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, I enjoyed reading your poem, and I'm intrigued wondering if this is about a male or female, although you have a few clues. I especially liked:
You guided me.
You encouraged my endeavors.
You pointed me to be free,
You were so clever.
(A poem of gratitude.) As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Hello author, I enjoyed reading your poem, and I'm intrigued wondering if this is about a male or female, although you have a few clues. I especially liked:
You guided me.
You encouraged my endeavors.
You pointed me to be free,
You were so clever.
(A poem of gratitude.) As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thank you ever so much for reading and then taking the time to review, I really appreciate your kind comments and good luck wishes. Now if I told you whether it was about a male or female that would be truly unfair.
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I'm waiting for the end of the contest for everyone to unmask themselves. Smiles, LateBloomer
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Dear author, I had a typo boo-boo in my remarks which I have corrected. My apologies. I have to stop doing these late night reviews. Good luck in the contest. LateBloomer
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LOL, I read typos rather well and generally look at the content first.
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LOL Probably not going to happen, oh wait for a moment I was thinking about who the crush victim was, lol, when it was us authors.
Comment from marybell1
I really enjoyed your secret fanstory crush " Crush". You rhymed it well and I just loved your roses and tomatoes picture- very clever
All the best
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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I really enjoyed your secret fanstory crush " Crush". You rhymed it well and I just loved your roses and tomatoes picture- very clever
All the best
Marybell1.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind comments, they were greatly appreciated.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from robyn corum
*smile*
This is a really sweet poem and I'm sure that it's intended target -- if they ever figure it out -- will find it adorable. haha! I really liked the vision of the three different 'reds' in the first stanza: the rose, the tomato and the words. (It's funny, but the way you write this, I can almost imagine a blush, too.) *smile*
Very sweet -- good luck!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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*smile*
This is a really sweet poem and I'm sure that it's intended target -- if they ever figure it out -- will find it adorable. haha! I really liked the vision of the three different 'reds' in the first stanza: the rose, the tomato and the words. (It's funny, but the way you write this, I can almost imagine a blush, too.) *smile*
Very sweet -- good luck!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind words and good luck wishes, glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from RGstar
I love reading these. There are some lucky authors out there. They should keep this series going. I always try to guess, but to no avail. Fun read.
Good luck author.
Best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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I love reading these. There are some lucky authors out there. They should keep this series going. I always try to guess, but to no avail. Fun read.
Good luck author.
Best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind words and good luck wishes, I am glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from BeasPeas
Roses and tomatoes--what could be better than that combo? I love both. This is a cute story of a crush. You kept it light and amusing. We do have our favorites to read and admire. Marilyn
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Roses and tomatoes--what could be better than that combo? I love both. This is a cute story of a crush. You kept it light and amusing. We do have our favorites to read and admire. Marilyn
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind words and comments, I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is a very good contest entry. You should do well, but it's hard to figure out what the judges will like. I have submitted some All-Time Best Award winners that got no votes.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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This is a very good contest entry. You should do well, but it's hard to figure out what the judges will like. I have submitted some All-Time Best Award winners that got no votes.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind words, What a shame about not getting votes, you are right one never knows what the judges will like.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is nice and light hearted.
It has good rhythm and flow.
Is the change of tense in the last line intentional?
Keep up the good work.
Sharon
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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This is nice and light hearted.
It has good rhythm and flow.
Is the change of tense in the last line intentional?
Keep up the good work.
Sharon
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind words and thoughts, yes it was intentional, just a bit of twist.
Comment from closetpoetjester
What a wonderful ode to your secret FS crush. You genuinely appreciate this person for their kindness and encouragement. Sometimes just a little of that is all we need to flourish. Your poem is lovely.
Well done! Good luck in this fun contest.
Cheers P
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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What a wonderful ode to your secret FS crush. You genuinely appreciate this person for their kindness and encouragement. Sometimes just a little of that is all we need to flourish. Your poem is lovely.
Well done! Good luck in this fun contest.
Cheers P
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your kind words and thoughts and of course the good luck wishes. I agree once in a while it is nice and it does prompt one to keep trying.
Comment from GracieAnn
This My Secret FanStory Crush contest submission has solid abab rhyming in each quatrain. Nice comparison between a rose and a tomato. Whose to say that one is more preferable than the other? On your title, did you mean to say infactuation or infatuation? Nice work. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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This My Secret FanStory Crush contest submission has solid abab rhyming in each quatrain. Nice comparison between a rose and a tomato. Whose to say that one is more preferable than the other? On your title, did you mean to say infactuation or infatuation? Nice work. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind comments and good wishes. With the title it was intentional but so far only two have commented, with you being one of the two. Again thanks.
