The innocence of childhood
Staying young21 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Waves, when we grew up...things were different...mom could stay home with the kids...cook and do homework with them...today...kids have to take on adult responsibilities way to soon...not always the parents fault...but a lot of times it is...kids truly do grew up way to fast...very well said my sweet friend...and very well written...picture says it all...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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HI Waves, when we grew up...things were different...mom could stay home with the kids...cook and do homework with them...today...kids have to take on adult responsibilities way to soon...not always the parents fault...but a lot of times it is...kids truly do grew up way to fast...very well said my sweet friend...and very well written...picture says it all...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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You are so right Linda, kids do grow up so fast
Thanks so much as always Linda
dip
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your so welcome you...xxoo love
Comment from Susanjohn
Children seem to grow up way too fast now and days! Such a shame ...We all wish for those carefree days and when children are forced to grow up too soon,"Is a certain proof and shows quite clearly" for sure.. :-/
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Children seem to grow up way too fast now and days! Such a shame ...We all wish for those carefree days and when children are forced to grow up too soon,"Is a certain proof and shows quite clearly" for sure.. :-/
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thanks for the great 6 Susan much appreciated
xdip
Comment from sandy montgomery
I love this one. Lots of great natural well flowing rhyme. Great presentation. This poem is full of wisdom. Great rhythm. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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I love this one. Lots of great natural well flowing rhyme. Great presentation. This poem is full of wisdom. Great rhythm. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thanks again Sandy much appreciated
dip
Comment from Teri7
Dip, This is a very well written poem about childhood and how they have to grow up so fast. I know that is true from my own experiences. You used very good descriptive wording and great imagery with the adorable picture. blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Dip, This is a very well written poem about childhood and how they have to grow up so fast. I know that is true from my own experiences. You used very good descriptive wording and great imagery with the adorable picture. blessings, Teri
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Thankyou Teri much appreciated as always
dip
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This is an excellent AABB with a message for all parents and caregivers. Love the dangling feel in the water. Absolutely right
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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This is an excellent AABB with a message for all parents and caregivers. Love the dangling feel in the water. Absolutely right
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Thanks again Barbara much appreciated
dip
Comment from Irish Rain
Oh yes, that children could stay children but just a while longer. Seems like these days, more than ever, childhood just flashes by. I wish my son was young again...especially during the holidays!! Wonderful Mr. Dip!! Blessings...
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Oh yes, that children could stay children but just a while longer. Seems like these days, more than ever, childhood just flashes by. I wish my son was young again...especially during the holidays!! Wonderful Mr. Dip!! Blessings...
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Thankyou so much Irish yes they sure do grow up too quickly
dip
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
I SO LOVE WHAT YOU HAVE WRITTEN HERE
I HAVE NOT BEEN READING OR WRTING TILL TODAY
AS YOU KNOW HOW I BEEN FEELING
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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I SO LOVE WHAT YOU HAVE WRITTEN HERE
I HAVE NOT BEEN READING OR WRTING TILL TODAY
AS YOU KNOW HOW I BEEN FEELING
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Thankyou so much Abby yes I do know what you have been going through through your verse and I am sincerely glad it has worked out for you'
Thankyou so much for the wonderful 6 much appreciated as always.
dip
Comment from Unspoken94
A wonderful poem with excellent pace and
rhyme form. But your message in this piece is
also significant. Children do indeed grow up too
fast in our world. War and poverty and child abuse
lay claim to so many children. In my case, the children
I work with often share what they wish they could do
or could have done, such as many of the examples you
list. -Bill
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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A wonderful poem with excellent pace and
rhyme form. But your message in this piece is
also significant. Children do indeed grow up too
fast in our world. War and poverty and child abuse
lay claim to so many children. In my case, the children
I work with often share what they wish they could do
or could have done, such as many of the examples you
list. -Bill
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Thankyou so much Bill Always appreciate your input
dip
Comment from damommy
I miss the days of my sons growing up more than my own growing up days, although they were great. There's too much emphasis on pushing children forward to success these days. Let them be children. It goes fast enough as it is.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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I miss the days of my sons growing up more than my own growing up days, although they were great. There's too much emphasis on pushing children forward to success these days. Let them be children. It goes fast enough as it is.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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You are so right Yvonne Thanks as always Yes children grow up so fast these days that's just the way society is with this fast paced world
dip
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Yes we do, we miss it and then when we have children we watch them grow up too fast as we age also. We are so busy enjoying watching our children as they grow that we forget to enjoy our years. Then we reach an age where we look back at our years and wish we could live it all over again. So I strongly agree with you, my friend, "Ah, the innocence of the child."
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Yes we do, we miss it and then when we have children we watch them grow up too fast as we age also. We are so busy enjoying watching our children as they grow that we forget to enjoy our years. Then we reach an age where we look back at our years and wish we could live it all over again. So I strongly agree with you, my friend, "Ah, the innocence of the child."
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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You have it spot on Tier where did those years go? they are over too early
dip
