All Hallows Eve
A Rondeau16 total reviews
Comment from Allyzeé
This is a fun poem that describes what halloween is. You utilized the rhymes and the lines to write a fun poem that flows nicely from one line to the next. Good luck on the contest
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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This is a fun poem that describes what halloween is. You utilized the rhymes and the lines to write a fun poem that flows nicely from one line to the next. Good luck on the contest
Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Hi Allyzee' A bit of fun with this one so pleased to have your review and Cheers for your good luck message Christine
Comment from Lucian Carter
Good tribute to the sweet, innocent, fun part of Halloween. I would have put "All Hallows Eve." at the end of the first line as well as the rest of them. Other than that I thought it was great.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Good tribute to the sweet, innocent, fun part of Halloween. I would have put "All Hallows Eve." at the end of the first line as well as the rest of them. Other than that I thought it was great.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Hi Lucian, Thanks very much for your encouraging review I used All Hallows Eve at the beginning as most of the examples did the same so thought I would try to stick to this format bit pleased ypu enjoyed this Cheers
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Such a delightful write for Halloween filled with rich colour and an amber ambience of trick and treating and witches costume, a joy to read and deserves a six, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Such a delightful write for Halloween filled with rich colour and an amber ambience of trick and treating and witches costume, a joy to read and deserves a six, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Hi Dolly, Thanks so much for such a lovely rating for my Rondeau, and even if it does not get a place you have made my day Cheers
Comment from Gert sherwood
Fun read author and a great example of a A Rondeau for Halloween
Smiles and Thank you for sharing and best to you in the contest
Gert
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Fun read author and a great example of a A Rondeau for Halloween
Smiles and Thank you for sharing and best to you in the contest
Gert
Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Hi Gert, A bit of fun against some great Entries it was fun to do and win lose or draw the fun is in the trying Cheers
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Yes I agree Chrissy710 it was load of fun to read the various interpretation of the picture
Gert
Comment from Dean Kuch
This is a very well written, excellent poem for the Halloween season, Anonymous Poet.
Your rondeau meets all of the requirements set forth by the rondeau form. The proper syllable count is n place, the rhyme scheme composed as it should be.
However, more than the technical side of things is the light-hearted spirit (no puns intended) your rondeau conveys.
Halloween is meant to be fun.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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This is a very well written, excellent poem for the Halloween season, Anonymous Poet.
Your rondeau meets all of the requirements set forth by the rondeau form. The proper syllable count is n place, the rhyme scheme composed as it should be.
However, more than the technical side of things is the light-hearted spirit (no puns intended) your rondeau conveys.
Halloween is meant to be fun.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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Hi Dean, Thanks so much for stopping by to read my Halloween Rondeau and yes it should be fun and I enjoyed having a go at this style and creating my poem for Halloween ( May just lock the door though just in case LOL Cheeeeeeers
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My pleasure. :)
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a very cute and clever Halloween poem, my friend. Rondeau are usually written in Iambic meter, but I know the contest did not specify this. Best wishes in the contest~Debbie
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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This is a very cute and clever Halloween poem, my friend. Rondeau are usually written in Iambic meter, but I know the contest did not specify this. Best wishes in the contest~Debbie
Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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Hi Debbie, Thank you for you read and review for my Rondeau I thought I would try to combine Halloween and Rondeau together ( This is rather a hard style to try to get the right rhyme so struggled a bit but overall happy with it Cheers for you best wishes I think the competition is tough
Comment from Liberty Justice
FIVE STARS for you dear poet. Good luck in contest. Looks like you are strong competition. Your poem is so spooky so amusing and fun to read. Love the way your rhymes flow down the line with treats on Hallows Eve and I love the way you coined this phrase. WELL DONE. LOL liberty justice
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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FIVE STARS for you dear poet. Good luck in contest. Looks like you are strong competition. Your poem is so spooky so amusing and fun to read. Love the way your rhymes flow down the line with treats on Hallows Eve and I love the way you coined this phrase. WELL DONE. LOL liberty justice
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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Hi Liberty Justice. Thank you so much for you 5 stars I had a bit of fun with this one so glad you liked it also. I found this style a little challenging to get it right but hopefully the final result makes muster. Many Cheers to you
Comment from Irish Rain
I love your Halloweeny Rondeau, and the artwork you chose is wonderful. This is happy, whimsical and fun, a delightful entry! Blessings...
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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I love your Halloweeny Rondeau, and the artwork you chose is wonderful. This is happy, whimsical and fun, a delightful entry! Blessings...
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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Hi Irish Rain, Thanks for your lovely comments for my Rondeau. Thought I would combine Halloween with this style and had fun with it although it took me a while to get it right ( I Hope LOL ) Cheers
Comment from robyn corum
Hey, Chris!
It's always so good to see you. I'm actually missing you, you know? We got to talk just enough that I felt I was getting to know you a bit, and then we quit~!
I enjoyed this poem. It could have been entered in the Halloween poem, too. But I think it will do well in the Rondeau contest as well. Much good luck to you! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Hey, Chris!
It's always so good to see you. I'm actually missing you, you know? We got to talk just enough that I felt I was getting to know you a bit, and then we quit~!
I enjoyed this poem. It could have been entered in the Halloween poem, too. But I think it will do well in the Rondeau contest as well. Much good luck to you! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Hi Robyn Thanks so much for reading my Rondeau , a bit of fun to write. I have just finished sending you a reply to a message re Disney Movies i seem to have runs on FS and as I work still, I get tired and can't be bothered writing But I do love The friends I have made on FS and enjoy everyones poetry and stories . Tonight waiting for the date to click over so I can post my poem for the picture challenge club ( It is the 23rd in Australia today but I have to wait until my 24 th post . but ready to go and look forward to seeing what people have come up with. Always great to chat with you I think we would have so much fun if we were able to meet maybe one day FS will have a get together I think that would be great fun to actually meet each other and many others on this site. happy writing Cheers Christine x
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oops! Didn't mean to put your name on this!! Sorry!!!
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No I thought you may not have never mind LOL I assume it came across your messages I find that funny you get lots of in messages from people you fan and even contest ones as well but I try not to ever sign my name when replying Dont tell anyone Ha Ha C
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No, no. I zoomed over to your page to review you after I read a review BY you. I try to do reciprocal reviews as often as I can. I didn't even notice that it was a contest entry. I normally do pay attention to things like that, but I couldn't sleep tonight/last night. It's 5:38 am -- been up since about 1 am. I think it's time for me to try to sleep again! hahaha!
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Good night and sleep well
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Rondeau poem on the theme of Halloween. Good rhyming and the repeating line emphasize the theme of haloween when all the activities come together.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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A very well-written Rondeau poem on the theme of Halloween. Good rhyming and the repeating line emphasize the theme of haloween when all the activities come together.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Hi Sandra. Thanks for your positive review for my Rondeau I had a free time on the weekend and thought I would check out the contests and as halloween is nearly here combine the two it was fun to create and glad you thought it well written Cheers
