That stolen kiss
That lasting embrace18 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your love poem with its rhythm and internal plus end rhymes. The picture you selected is charming as well. Here's to savouring love! Smiles and happy Sunday- Joan
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2017
I enjoyed your love poem with its rhythm and internal plus end rhymes. The picture you selected is charming as well. Here's to savouring love! Smiles and happy Sunday- Joan
Comment Written 22-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2017
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Thankyou so much Joan really appreciate your review
dip
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi dip. This is a nicely composed romance poem. The use of internal line and end-line rhyme, especially in the first stanza is nice. This one is my favorite, though:
"Gets me through another day
Whenever you're not there
You're all I think of when I'm away
Just want you to be aware"
Love does get us through our days, especially the most difficult ones.
Marilyn
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
Hi dip. This is a nicely composed romance poem. The use of internal line and end-line rhyme, especially in the first stanza is nice. This one is my favorite, though:
"Gets me through another day
Whenever you're not there
You're all I think of when I'm away
Just want you to be aware"
Love does get us through our days, especially the most difficult ones.
Marilyn
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thanks so much Marilyn. Your reviews are always positive and mean a lot to me.
dip
Comment from country ranch writer
Love once again is the heart of this poem. Peace,love and desire come into play as we all grow into a relationship. Love comes and love goes sometimes until we find ourselves
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
Love once again is the heart of this poem. Peace,love and desire come into play as we all grow into a relationship. Love comes and love goes sometimes until we find ourselves
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thankyou so much Mom much appreciated as always
xxdip
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Comment from Lucian Carter
A nice poem to go with a touching picture. The ABAB style works well. You always seem to capture the sweet side of love so well. I aspire to your skill on that front. Good job.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
A nice poem to go with a touching picture. The ABAB style works well. You always seem to capture the sweet side of love so well. I aspire to your skill on that front. Good job.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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That is such a compliment Lucian, thankyou.
I an glad you liked it
dip
Comment from emptypage
Hey, Dip.
Sweet poem. You are--and I've said it before--quite the romantic. I'm not sure who (wife, girl, guy, etc) you love to this degree, but I envy you. Your tender words tell all I need to know.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
Hey, Dip.
Sweet poem. You are--and I've said it before--quite the romantic. I'm not sure who (wife, girl, guy, etc) you love to this degree, but I envy you. Your tender words tell all I need to know.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thankyou so much empty much appreciated
dip
Comment from Heather Knight
Hi Mark,
I love the poem and the super cute picture.
The first verse is great, with all those words ending in -iss.
Very nicely written post. And very funny author notes.
Thanks.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
Hi Mark,
I love the poem and the super cute picture.
The first verse is great, with all those words ending in -iss.
Very nicely written post. And very funny author notes.
Thanks.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thankyou so much Maria at least you like them lol
dip
Comment from Susanjohn
Yes, another love poem from the master himself! Love it dear dip! this is just a feel good little poem...of stolen sweet kisses to savor and get through the days! loving that adorable picture too. :-) hugs you
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
Yes, another love poem from the master himself! Love it dear dip! this is just a feel good little poem...of stolen sweet kisses to savor and get through the days! loving that adorable picture too. :-) hugs you
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thanks so much again Susan your reviews always mean a lot to me
dip
Comment from Daniel Silverhawk
I love the title to this poem. I wish I would have thought of this.
Saw an error:
That stolen kiss is what I miss
When I'm not next you (to)
It really brings back memories of stolen kisses from me college days. I remember one in particular...
All these years later.
Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
I love the title to this poem. I wish I would have thought of this.
Saw an error:
That stolen kiss is what I miss
When I'm not next you (to)
It really brings back memories of stolen kisses from me college days. I remember one in particular...
All these years later.
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thanks again Daniel I will fix the error
much appreciated
dip
Comment from patcelaw
Dip, this poem is an okay poem, but it is not really very romantic. Have a wonder filled weekend of joys and blessings, Patricia
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
Dip, this poem is an okay poem, but it is not really very romantic. Have a wonder filled weekend of joys and blessings, Patricia
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thanks Pat I appreciate you thoughts and opinion
dip
Comment from Teri7
I like them Dip! You are so good at writing them. This is a really cute picture and you used really great words also. I enjoyed it very much.
Please check out this one thing:
When I'm not next you
did you meant to say - When I'm not next (to) you
Great job! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
I like them Dip! You are so good at writing them. This is a really cute picture and you used really great words also. I enjoyed it very much.
Please check out this one thing:
When I'm not next you
did you meant to say - When I'm not next (to) you
Great job! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Yeah I did someone just pointed that out to me I have fixed now thankyou so much Teri
dip