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Obscured

Current Political Thought

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Comment from rama devi
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Excellent political commentary - showing not telling! Not easy to achieve in a one-liner. Well done! Important and relevant. The use of the word OUR is key, here. Superb alliteration, superb flow, and fine presentation. Bravo and congrats on placing in the contest.

Warm Welcome to FS!

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
    Thank you!
reply by rama devi on 08-Dec-2017
    ;-))
Comment from LIJ Red
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Note me, all I have is a mote. The old girl needs some help, she's under attack from above by the globalists and from below by the illegals who are still loyal to Mexico and Guatemala. Neither of these parties will be good for us in the end. I think this is an excellent one-line poem.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
    Thank you.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder II
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This is terrific. I really like the deep message of your poem. The image goes with it but may be too graphic since this poem clearly has deeper meaning. Very creative with just a few words.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
    Thank you and I hope the picture doesn't detract from deeper thought.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written one Line poem. When we resist what is in front of us, we become blind and don't see the freedom right in front of us. Our thoughts is the start of our downfall.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
    Thank you for the insight and review.
Comment from oliver818
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Nice poem. I like the way the photo and the picture are related in such an interesting way. Overall, a good read.! Thanks for sharing and have a really great day

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
    You're welcome and thank you for the review.
Comment from marybell1
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I really enjoyed your one line poem "Obscured". Your photo fitted your poem perfectly, or was it the otherwise round? You said rather a lot in your one line.
All the best.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
    Thank you. Sometimes less is more.
reply by marybell1 on 19-Oct-2017
    You are most welcome.
    Marybell1.
Comment from Walu Feral
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G'day mate.

Yes, indeed, this little piece say so much and leaves a lot of food for thought.

It's commendable to be able to say so much in such a few words.

We certainly live in very uncertain times and need to watch what we do and who we vote for I believe.

A great little contest entry and I wish you the best of luck in it.

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
    I believe that as well. I was shocked last year at the candidate offerings and could see this wasn't going in a very good direction. People turn to perception rather than substance for answers. The biggest voice, rather than the sharpest mind.

    Thank you for the review and your thoughts.
reply by Walu Feral on 19-Oct-2017
    Scary stuff, mate.