Autumn Eve
Autumn brings nature's promise.49 total reviews
Comment from teols2016
Fall offers such lovely imagery and you take full advantage of that by including such images in your words. Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
Fall offers such lovely imagery and you take full advantage of that by including such images in your words. Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I hope you could feel the imagery.
Fan friend,
Brigitte
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought you did an excellent job with this poem. I could see the colors in my head. You are expressing vivid imagery. Wonderful word choices. Very creative with just a few lines.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
I thought you did an excellent job with this poem. I could see the colors in my head. You are expressing vivid imagery. Wonderful word choices. Very creative with just a few lines.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Your very comments are delightfully received. Thank you very much.
Fan friend,
Brigitte
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
A beautiful autumnal image, my favorite season, very beautiful and well done with the ABC scheme, beautiful images of fall, very kindest regard Meia xx
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
A beautiful autumnal image, my favorite season, very beautiful and well done with the ABC scheme, beautiful images of fall, very kindest regard Meia xx
Comment Written 17-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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These comments were delightfully received. I love Autumn and I think you as a reader felt my imagery.
Thank you!
Fan Friend,
brigitte
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Brigitte;
This is a lovely ABC poem, and I love the way you presented it. Since Autumn is my favorite season, I rejoice in the colors and smell of the days as summer wanes, and the chill is in the air.
Great job and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
Hi, Brigitte;
This is a lovely ABC poem, and I love the way you presented it. Since Autumn is my favorite season, I rejoice in the colors and smell of the days as summer wanes, and the chill is in the air.
Great job and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 17-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
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I am honored for this review from someone as accomplished as you. Oh my goodness a rhyme! Thank you for this rating, I am humbled.
Your friend,
Brgitte
Comment from GWHARGIS
Your poem was very serene itself. You managed to evoke a calmness that comes with a lazy autumn afternoon. The photo was beautiful and simple. A perfect pairing with your words. Well done and good luck with the contest. Gretchen
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
Your poem was very serene itself. You managed to evoke a calmness that comes with a lazy autumn afternoon. The photo was beautiful and simple. A perfect pairing with your words. Well done and good luck with the contest. Gretchen
Comment Written 17-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much. The contest is over but Fall remains...
Brigitte
Comment from dragonpoet
A very good description of a picture post card scene an the feeling it evokes. It almost seems to be about the movement of the sun during a sunset.
Hope you did well in the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
A very good description of a picture post card scene an the feeling it evokes. It almost seems to be about the movement of the sun during a sunset.
Hope you did well in the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 17-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
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Can you feel it. I think you can. Thank you for this review.
Brigitte
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You're welcome, Brigitte.
Joan
Comment from Daniel Silverhawk
Nice abc poem. I love the colors and the image goes well with the true art, the words.
I like how you used the rhyme scheme a b cc bit helps keep the flow together even with an odd number of lines. Very good job. Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
Nice abc poem. I love the colors and the image goes well with the true art, the words.
I like how you used the rhyme scheme a b cc bit helps keep the flow together even with an odd number of lines. Very good job. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
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Thank you for this kind review. Obliviously, I love Fall.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from Liberty Justice
FIVE STARS. A poem so pure and serene paints beauty of falls. Colors of green, red, brown, so lovely around us as poet brings these colors to our mind. Great job with photo depicting fall's colors. Check out my writings and 2 books in my profile. WELL DONE. liberty justice
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
FIVE STARS. A poem so pure and serene paints beauty of falls. Colors of green, red, brown, so lovely around us as poet brings these colors to our mind. Great job with photo depicting fall's colors. Check out my writings and 2 books in my profile. WELL DONE. liberty justice
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much for reading and this kind review. Will check out the suggested with pleasure.
Fan friend,
Brigitte
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WOW! God Bless! How old are you, pray tell? Hope yall live many more. Theres a 112 year old man and I think an 120 year old woman still living. Check out my writings also and 2 books in my profile. lolol
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Older than dirt, lol.
Brigitte
Comment from pbomar1115
Poets come up with clever ways to demonstrate their nimble, mental capacity for poems. Clearly, this kind is new to me. Maybe because I don't really make many attempts at writing many; however, I do appreciate and enjoy reading them. When I know the goals, such as this one, I enjoy it best. This is excellent, Brigitte.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
Poets come up with clever ways to demonstrate their nimble, mental capacity for poems. Clearly, this kind is new to me. Maybe because I don't really make many attempts at writing many; however, I do appreciate and enjoy reading them. When I know the goals, such as this one, I enjoy it best. This is excellent, Brigitte.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
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Thank you for this kind review. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from Thomas Bowling
You paint a wonderful picture of autumn in the north. In Florida, we only need one color to paint autumn, dark green. It works for every other season too. Good luck with your book. I hope it does well.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
You paint a wonderful picture of autumn in the north. In Florida, we only need one color to paint autumn, dark green. It works for every other season too. Good luck with your book. I hope it does well.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
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Thank you the review and kind words. The book is in printing now and it has been a grueling process. Hopefully, worth the effort.
Blessings,
Brigitte