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Friday the 13th

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Comment from robyn corum
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Dan,

What a fun poem about this dreaded 'holiday'(?) What IS Friday the Thirteenth? It's not a holiday - what do you call it? Just an 'observance' or something like that? I don't know!

Anyway, you had some great points in here. My favorite stanza was:

So many feel this day is real
Danger comes at every corner
Fear embraces the nightly chorus
For Friday the 13th is notorious

And I thought the following was a really smart line:
Still home is not a finding relief

Sad, but true! Thanks so much!

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2017


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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Yes, I'm glad the day has passed and it even prevented me from going on a shopping trip, I left it until today just in case! They showed he movie on the TV too! Your poem is a tribute to the day, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2017


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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi, Dan

= I saw the first one many years ago, but not any since then.
= Just not a Halloween person. I'm a scrooge on most holiday. LOL
= I enjoyed your poem. As always, very well penned and presented.

Cheers, J (*<*)

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2017


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Comment from Teri7
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Dan, This is a very well written poem about this day - Friday the 13th. I am so thankful I am not superstitious. It is just another day. Very good wording and great imagery! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2017


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Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
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I like your friday the 13th pem, my friend, yes, it is a notorious day that people fear.
For the enchanted it could be lucky, lol. ~Kerry

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2017


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reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 16-Oct-2017
    Your welcome.
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Dan,
Oh right today is Friday the 13th very good
Here is wha tI say--
Don't be superstitious. Nothing will happen on Friday the 13th that cannot happen on Saturday the 14th.

Gert

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
    Thanks for the comments. Actually it has been a very good day for me.
reply by Gert sherwood on 14-Oct-2017
    You are Welcome Dan
    Same for me nothing freaky happen to me.
    Gert
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This is a haunted poem for the 13th. I love your word choices and the flow of the poem is very natural. The rhymes work well. Great job - you really take this day to a new level!

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2017


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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A vety well-written poem about the bad luck day. Our tbufhts are powerful and when we think about the dangers of the day, we will attract bad luck and danger to us on this day.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2017


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