Halloween scene
Free verse15 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
You gotta watch those soups offered to you by witches.
Sally says if you detect the scents of Frog's Breath one of the stinky stew's ingredients is most likely deadly Nightshade.
A witch is never really concerned with whether you're hungry and cold or not. She's not being generous for generosities sake.
Yes, creepy crawlie stew is pretty hard to resist, I know. But never--and I mean NEVER!--allow your stomach to do your thinking for you. It could be the difference between life, and death!
Great take on the picture provided to you by the 'Picture This!' photo challenge group, Trisha.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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You gotta watch those soups offered to you by witches.
Sally says if you detect the scents of Frog's Breath one of the stinky stew's ingredients is most likely deadly Nightshade.
A witch is never really concerned with whether you're hungry and cold or not. She's not being generous for generosities sake.
Yes, creepy crawlie stew is pretty hard to resist, I know. But never--and I mean NEVER!--allow your stomach to do your thinking for you. It could be the difference between life, and death!
Great take on the picture provided to you by the 'Picture This!' photo challenge group, Trisha.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2017
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You are appreciated, Dean
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You are crazy OMG! 103 reviews. You just trampled over any competitors
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It won't matter.
Trust me...
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Does not make sense!
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I've been trying to figure it out for four years.
Comment from sunao
Thank you so much for sharing and Nah, nah! I would not like to join the company of the halloween scene. I respect anyone who would want though. Please keep up the good work and have a fabulous day!
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for sharing and Nah, nah! I would not like to join the company of the halloween scene. I respect anyone who would want though. Please keep up the good work and have a fabulous day!
Comment Written 27-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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I can?t get anyone to join the witch~ I wonder why.! She makes good earwig tea! Thanks so much for reviewing, sunao. Have a super day
hugs Trisha
Comment from rosehill (Wendy)
Well, I might visit, but definitely wouldn't stay for dinner. Your stew ingredients are quite interesting and the reasoning behind the various scenery items in the picture are very clever. I enjoyed the artists dream and the read.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Well, I might visit, but definitely wouldn't stay for dinner. Your stew ingredients are quite interesting and the reasoning behind the various scenery items in the picture are very clever. I enjoyed the artists dream and the read.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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I really appreciate your review and I?m glad you didn?t stop for that disgusting food! Have a great day
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Pantygynt
I found this unsettlingn ot because of the content. Weird witches abound at this time of year but the random use of capaital letters unaccompanied by other forms of punctuation caused me to lose my way somewhat.
I cam upon this typo. I don't believe two indefinite articles were intended and one needs to go, which is up to you.
"The old witch lives on a
A long winding road"
For something that describes itself as free verse there is a great deal of end rhyme in this. Yes, I know it is irregular and unschemable but it seems to me to be too much for it to count as true free verse.
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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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I found this unsettlingn ot because of the content. Weird witches abound at this time of year but the random use of capaital letters unaccompanied by other forms of punctuation caused me to lose my way somewhat.
I cam upon this typo. I don't believe two indefinite articles were intended and one needs to go, which is up to you.
"The old witch lives on a
A long winding road"
For something that describes itself as free verse there is a great deal of end rhyme in this. Yes, I know it is irregular and unschemable but it seems to me to be too much for it to count as true free verse.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thanks for reading, Panty
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Haha ... no, I don't want to visit either. :)
I enjoyed reading your interpretation of the picture at hand. Lots of creepy things in here that go bump in the night. I wouldn't want to taste that stew. I love all the creepy/crawly ingredients for this vile brew!
Well done! ~~ Connie
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Haha ... no, I don't want to visit either. :)
I enjoyed reading your interpretation of the picture at hand. Lots of creepy things in here that go bump in the night. I wouldn't want to taste that stew. I love all the creepy/crawly ingredients for this vile brew!
Well done! ~~ Connie
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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It?s one of my favorite recipes! Thanks so much for a great review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Boogienights
This is a very descriptive and fun poem justv in time for halloween. Your words paint a vivid picture in the mind, and no I wouldn't to visit! I really liked this, thanks,for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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This is a very descriptive and fun poem justv in time for halloween. Your words paint a vivid picture in the mind, and no I wouldn't to visit! I really liked this, thanks,for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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You are welcome! I appreciate you reviewing, and I?m happy the images were strong
Hugs ,Trisha
Comment from JennaG
Very nicely done! I like how you've captured in words all the detail in the picture ~ the wishing well, the cauldron, the black crosses. It all sets the stage for the witch to prepare her creepy concoction. Nope, I don't want to visit either, but I enjoyed reading your poem about this Halloween scene. Great work! :)
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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Very nicely done! I like how you've captured in words all the detail in the picture ~ the wishing well, the cauldron, the black crosses. It all sets the stage for the witch to prepare her creepy concoction. Nope, I don't want to visit either, but I enjoyed reading your poem about this Halloween scene. Great work! :)
Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much! I am happy it was a creepy read. His was a fun challenge to write about.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Leineco
LOL
Well. . . at first, I thought it was an inviting pastural
setting. . .but now that you've pointed out its portentous
implications. . .I think I'll take an alternate route!
Nicely done BL :-)
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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LOL
Well. . . at first, I thought it was an inviting pastural
setting. . .but now that you've pointed out its portentous
implications. . .I think I'll take an alternate route!
Nicely done BL :-)
Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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Too bad ?me pretty?, come inside for a while, I can brew you some earwig tea!
Thanks so much for reviewing my poem. I?m glad it was repulsive to you
Trisha
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Too bad ?me pretty?, come inside for a while, I can brew you some earwig tea!
Thanks so much for reviewing my poem. I?m glad it was repulsive to you
Trisha
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Bucketlist What a beaut poem and no I won't visit either. You have really written ablut the image incorporating all the elements in the image and also creating a good story .Well done a great challenge poem Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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Hi Bucketlist What a beaut poem and no I won't visit either. You have really written ablut the image incorporating all the elements in the image and also creating a good story .Well done a great challenge poem Cheers Christine
Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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Thanks so much for reviewing. Chrissy
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Halloween poem and an excelkent interpretation of the witches activities leading to the highlight of the long awaited event. The potions are ready to enchant everyone who are willing to take the risk.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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A very well-written Halloween poem and an excelkent interpretation of the witches activities leading to the highlight of the long awaited event. The potions are ready to enchant everyone who are willing to take the risk.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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Thanks very much, I?m so glad you enjoyed reading it.
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