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Comment from Brett Matthew West
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You know, you ain't so bad a writer yourself.

Always nice to see a member credited for their work and sure she appreciated it very much.

Liked the last line about "I wouldn't be so broke".

Writing can be a tough business on this site and in the real world. As a Freelance Writer, I can definitely relate to that line.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017
    Thanks mate sorry the rewards are run out. Mary is a terrific writer I enjoyed her recent book now finished I think.
Comment from MTF1955
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Thank you so very much! I am so touched I could never express how you made me feel but very special and very blessed to have you as my friend. Thank you again. Mary

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
    Glad you finally got to see it and enjoyed it. I am glad to have you as a new friend on FS. You don't know how many times I have considered quitting FS for a lot of reasons. But for some reason God keeps bringing new friends and great writers along to keep me here.
Comment from seaglass
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Great poem with perfect rhyme. It always inspirational to see a fan member exalted. Positive posts are always encouraging. The illustration is lovely, as well.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
    Thanks mate. Good to see you around again and thanks for the BIC SIX I saw that and began to post to you but my puter dropped out Grrrr.
Comment from GracieAnn
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Hey there, Mate!
What a wonderful tribute to you friend and wife. Would a Brit be somehow less desirable than an Aussie? I hadn't really thought of the impressions we have of different English speaking populations. Interesting. Nicely done! :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
    Not my wife, Sis. A new friend on FS. Someone (American) told me they use the expression Brit for British as well. Thanks for coming by.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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I love this site because of all the people we meet from all over. There is so much talent on here and so much to learn. I'm glad you met Mary and I'm sure she's glad to have met you :)

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
    Thanks friend have forgotten your name again duh! Glad you liked the poem.
Comment from GWinterwin
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Good poem about your friend Mary. Good rhyming and word flow make it easy to read and understand. Yes there are some very nice people here on Facebook. Thanks for sharing with us my brother.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
    And you know you are just one of, dear Bro in Christ. I think you know I battle with "pulling the plug" then the Lord brings some new reasons along to stay a bit longer hehe.
reply by GWinterwin on 12-Oct-2017
    Hope things are going better brother, will keep you in our prayers.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
    Thanks for the prayers. Pray for Louise especially she is really down over all the NDIS Stuff. I forget if you are on Facebook?
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Sankey, this is a lovely tribute and acknowledgement of Mary's writing. I'm sure she will be over the moon with your praise. Very well written poem. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
    Thanks Ulla hope to get back to your stuff soon as well.
Comment from Joan E.
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Thank you for introducing me to Mary--I will have to check out her work on FanStory. I enjoyed your rhymed quatrains as a tribute and the symbolic, emerging butterfly artwork. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
    Thanks Joan. Just some people sorta click with ya at times.
Comment from Sasha
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This is a lovely tribute to your new friend. I am sure it made her/him bush but it is so nice when someone goes the extra mile to point out the talent of someone they admire. We are familiar with the expressin Brits...we use it too.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
    Thanks Sasha, I think you know you are a special friend too.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem and tribute to Mary. Sometimes a person can impress us without us knowing who they are and when we met them we are just attracted to them for some reason.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
    Hi Sis thanks for the lovely review. I told Mary her novel deserves transforming into a movie or mini-series.