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All he did was stare

A poem of someone who has met a demon like man.

6 total reviews 
Comment from Michael Ludwinder II
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This was one heck of a Halloween story! I like how you use your poem to tell a story. The story easily kept my interest. The poem is written well and each line flows into the other. Great imagery!

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2017

Comment from JennaG
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I really like your Halloween poem! It's creative and unique. I like how you use the repeating line "And all he did was stare..." right up to the point where the thunder crashes and then everything changes. The man disappears, comes back, and now it's the narrator of the poem that is doing the staring. Perfect picture to go along with your words. This is really well done! Best of luck to you in the contest! :)

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2017

Comment from Mustangpatty1029
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Hello there;
thank you for sharing your entry in the Halloween Poetry contest. Your piece certainly has the makings of a spooky story. I'm not sure what I would do if I met a man like this one.

Good luck in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2017

Comment from Natali Holden
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I would definitely say you put the horror from Halloween in your poem. Maybe you should change the genre from fantasy to horror and thriller. It would fit right in there, or at least in my opinion. Very horrific. Nice work! Good luck!
Natali ;)

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2017

Comment from RodG
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Oh, this is creepy from start to finish. The refrain definitely magnifies the spookiness of this creature staring at the Speaker in the dark. Easy to visualize this scary scene.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2017

Comment from marybell1
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An interesting poem with repetition used well. You also rhymed it well. It is a pity that you did not find a scary picture to enhance your poem.
All the best.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2017