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Lilac moon

Free Verse Poem

19 total reviews 
Comment from MelB
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Hi Sandra, fantastic artwork for this wonderfully descriptive poem. Something is alluring and beautiful about a lilac colored moon. Great use of alliteration with mesmerized my mind.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a great new week,
    Sandra.
Comment from Irish Rain
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That even SOUNDS beautiful....'The Land of the Lilac Moon.' I love your imagination in this. You've interpretted this picture quite magically! Blessings...

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a great new week,
    Sandra.
Comment from Just2Write
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Very nice, Sandra. The moon and mood are very subtle in this poem. I like the straight-forward approach and your use of internal rhyme (eye(s) and sky / below and know / shore and adore)
Well done.
Rose.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a great new week,
    Sandra.
Comment from Joan E.
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I am pleased that the eye-catching picture inspired your free verse. I have never seen a lilac moon, but your words made it come to life over the green lake. Thanks for transporting me- Joan

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a great new week,
    Sandra.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
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Sandra, this is a great free verse poem - I really enjoyed it. I think it is my favorite of all your poems that I have read. It has a way of taking the reader to a special place - I love the picture too. Beautiful! ~DD

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a great new week,
    Sandra.
Comment from lyenochka
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This reads very smoothly. I like your use of "lilac" for the color as it seems to fit the color in the picture well. It's a more gentle, pastel color than full strength purple.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a great new week,
    Sandra.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Exceptional
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this deserves a six because of the extensive descriptions and the words used to reallymake the picture sing. Very well done in wording

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
    Hi, Barb,

    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work. Thanks again for the six-star rating.

    Have a great new week,
    Sandra.
Comment from FxstsLisa
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Most beautiful poem! I noticed you said this poem was for the free verse club but did you also enter this in the contest? If not, you should. Nicely done piece. Have a nice evening!

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a great new week,
    Sandra.
Comment from Ideasaregems-Dawn
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Oh, this is quite lovely, Sandra - beautiful imagery, and I can barely believe you actually managed to find a video with a picture of a sky that DOES have purple hues.

"I look from the shore, I truly adore..." - I feel it! And I adore your poem.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
    Hi, Dawn,

    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a great new week,
    Sandra.
Comment from Maria Jose Garcia
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I like your free verse poem, Sandra. It has the occasional rhyme that makes the rhythm more interesting.
I'm glad to know you've joined this club as well.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
    Hi, Maria,

    Thank you for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

    Have a great new week,
    Sandra.