Lover's adieu
3 line poem33 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
In these few words you instill the feeling of the loneliness and confusion of grief following a death. The look on the girl's face in the artwork seems to mirror this emotion well.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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In these few words you instill the feeling of the loneliness and confusion of grief following a death. The look on the girl's face in the artwork seems to mirror this emotion well.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thanks for reading and critique zanya
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Any time. It's what we are here to do.
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Comment from smileycloud
good entry in the contest
the prompt requirement is met well
with this well written fine poem
the message is put out there quite vividly with some unique language
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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good entry in the contest
the prompt requirement is met well
with this well written fine poem
the message is put out there quite vividly with some unique language
have a smiley day
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Great review -thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Bichon
A thoughtful poem. I am sure many relate to it, the common broken heart throughout the ages. Hopefully the loneliest doesn't last forever. A great poem overall.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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A thoughtful poem. I am sure many relate to it, the common broken heart throughout the ages. Hopefully the loneliest doesn't last forever. A great poem overall.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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A most encouraging and thoughtful review zanya
Comment from rjuselius
This is a truly beautiful piece of poetry dear zanya! I think everyone has a similar experience.
Thanks for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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This is a truly beautiful piece of poetry dear zanya! I think everyone has a similar experience.
Thanks for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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And thanks for such an encouraging review zanya
Comment from Dean Kuch
Through a lens of loneliness..." Wonderful assonance of "L" and alliteration, Zanya.
Life is much more fun when you're able to spend your time with someone you dearly love.
Solitude is great too, but not 24/7. We're human beings who need the interaction of others of our kind.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Through a lens of loneliness..." Wonderful assonance of "L" and alliteration, Zanya.
Life is much more fun when you're able to spend your time with someone you dearly love.
Solitude is great too, but not 24/7. We're human beings who need the interaction of others of our kind.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Yes indeed- thanks for reading and encouraging review zanya
Comment from Liberty Justice
Five stars for you. Looks like a person's life is turned upside down, since someone left her. Metaphors tell this lonely story, but life must go on. Check me out, also. liberty justice
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Five stars for you. Looks like a person's life is turned upside down, since someone left her. Metaphors tell this lonely story, but life must go on. Check me out, also. liberty justice
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thanks for reviewing -- will check you out too ! zanya
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
oh, so sad, this is a very nicely done 3 line poem, my friend,
Good luck to you:) ~Kerry
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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oh, so sad, this is a very nicely done 3 line poem, my friend,
Good luck to you:) ~Kerry
Comment Written 12-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thanks for encouraging review zanya
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Your welcome:)
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your poem. Your thoughts flow well with a story of a relationship ending. It's sad when love doesn't work. Your artwork choice is interesting. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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I enjoyed reading your poem. Your thoughts flow well with a story of a relationship ending. It's sad when love doesn't work. Your artwork choice is interesting. Best wishes!
Comment Written 12-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from GWinterwin
Good picture with words that tells a very realistic message. Life can become lonely leading to depression and much more sometimes. The one that has moved on may never look back.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Good picture with words that tells a very realistic message. Life can become lonely leading to depression and much more sometimes. The one that has moved on may never look back.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thanks for reading and critique zanya
Comment from Irish Rain
'A lens of loneliness'...such a poignant, and well suited line to this heart-breaking poem!! A wonderful entry in this contest, good luck, blessings...
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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'A lens of loneliness'...such a poignant, and well suited line to this heart-breaking poem!! A wonderful entry in this contest, good luck, blessings...
Comment Written 12-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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A wonderful heartfelt review ! zanya
