I'm never drinking again
The morning after.9 total reviews
Comment from Lucian Carter
Interesting reverse Tetractys, nice entry in the contest. Binge drinking can be a real problem; it can also be really funny. You've done well here, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
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Interesting reverse Tetractys, nice entry in the contest. Binge drinking can be a real problem; it can also be really funny. You've done well here, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
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Thank you
Comment from Bill Schott
This tetractys, I'm Never Drinking Again, is set up properly and opens up the slow recall that keeps on reminding the recovering, over-served person that inhibitions can be our friend sometimes.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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This tetractys, I'm Never Drinking Again, is set up properly and opens up the slow recall that keeps on reminding the recovering, over-served person that inhibitions can be our friend sometimes.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Thanks for your review.
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from DonandVicki
Been there done that, at the time it seemed like a good idea, right?Your poem leaves a lot up to the reader's imagination, as all good poetry should do. I enjoyed the flow of your well-crafted words. Well written, well done. Don
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Been there done that, at the time it seemed like a good idea, right?Your poem leaves a lot up to the reader's imagination, as all good poetry should do. I enjoyed the flow of your well-crafted words. Well written, well done. Don
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thanks a lot for your comments
Comment from humpwhistle
Believe it or not, I have overindulged. Yep.
But I've rarely compounded my spree
by posting a poem about it.
Just a word to the wise.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Believe it or not, I have overindulged. Yep.
But I've rarely compounded my spree
by posting a poem about it.
Just a word to the wise.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thanks for reading and commenting.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This is a very strong entry to the tetractys poem contest. It follows perfectly and your addition of humor adds to the strength of the piece
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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This is a very strong entry to the tetractys poem contest. It follows perfectly and your addition of humor adds to the strength of the piece
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thanks. I appreciate your kind comments.
Comment from dmt1967
This poem reminded me of my teenage years. Although, I never striped, or I don't think so. I liked the picture and the words were very potent. Great poem and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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This poem reminded me of my teenage years. Although, I never striped, or I don't think so. I liked the picture and the words were very potent. Great poem and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thank you
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Thank you
Comment from Sallyo
Well, that's fun... brings a grin on the last syllable. I don't know this form, but I read the explanation and your piece fits as a reversed version. It's surprising what can be achieved in so few words.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Well, that's fun... brings a grin on the last syllable. I don't know this form, but I read the explanation and your piece fits as a reversed version. It's surprising what can be achieved in so few words.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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I had never heard of this format before but I LOVE playing around with these strange formats. Thanks for commenting.
Comment from DR DIP
Fortunately I don't drink so my lose of memory is due to my dementia not alcohol lol
Yes you did strip and you made quite a bit of money on the side! lol thanks for sharing your body lol
dip
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Fortunately I don't drink so my lose of memory is due to my dementia not alcohol lol
Yes you did strip and you made quite a bit of money on the side! lol thanks for sharing your body lol
dip
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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No problem L.O.L.
Thanks Dip.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Sometimes when you tie one on there is no recalling what you may have said or done, and you can only hope you did not do something you will regret in the morning.
Alcohol will do that to you though.
Well crafted poem that meets the requirements of this contest.
Structurally found no errors.
Should make an interesting entry into this contest.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Sometimes when you tie one on there is no recalling what you may have said or done, and you can only hope you did not do something you will regret in the morning.
Alcohol will do that to you though.
Well crafted poem that meets the requirements of this contest.
Structurally found no errors.
Should make an interesting entry into this contest.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thank you.
