I'm now a hermit
Story of a Fanstory addict.7 total reviews
Comment from Joy Graham
Oh yes, I can relate. I don't spend as much time on the site as I used to, but this poem brings it all back to life for me lol! This site is incredibly addictive. Well said.
- your syllables all counted out fine for me.
- "any more" - I think this should be one word - anymore.
- Best wishes in the contest. I think you have a fine entry.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Oh yes, I can relate. I don't spend as much time on the site as I used to, but this poem brings it all back to life for me lol! This site is incredibly addictive. Well said.
- your syllables all counted out fine for me.
- "any more" - I think this should be one word - anymore.
- Best wishes in the contest. I think you have a fine entry.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Thanks. It won first place.
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Congratulations!
Comment from angel123
I see your hopes came true. I noticed you received your six stars. I like your subject and good alliteration of t and s, words. Your artwork choice goes well with your message. I like the humor in it, as well.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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I see your hopes came true. I noticed you received your six stars. I like your subject and good alliteration of t and s, words. Your artwork choice goes well with your message. I like the humor in it, as well.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Thank you.
Comment from ragerde
I'll give you six stars for this truthful, self-reflective poem. I just pray that I don't follow in your footprints. It can become a reward-seeking addiction, kind of like the lottery. The facial expression on the artwork you chose tells it all,
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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I'll give you six stars for this truthful, self-reflective poem. I just pray that I don't follow in your footprints. It can become a reward-seeking addiction, kind of like the lottery. The facial expression on the artwork you chose tells it all,
Comment Written 07-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for the super 6. I hope you know I am only joking about being a hermit.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer (wink)
This is a super duper entry for the 34-syllable contest (how random is that?) *smile*
It should certainly do well, since most everyone here can relate. hahahaha! This place is like cyber-heroin. It should be measured out and injected in small doses so we don't ENTIRELY leave our lives and families to rot and die without us. hahahaha!
Good luck! I enjoyed!
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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Dear Mystery Writer (wink)
This is a super duper entry for the 34-syllable contest (how random is that?) *smile*
It should certainly do well, since most everyone here can relate. hahahaha! This place is like cyber-heroin. It should be measured out and injected in small doses so we don't ENTIRELY leave our lives and families to rot and die without us. hahahaha!
Good luck! I enjoyed!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017
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You are soooo right Robyn. Glad you liked it and didn't take it literally like some folk. L.O.L.
Comment from His Grayness
Too clever for words, the photo does it all and I got a real giggle out of this one! It's not far off if at all from yours truly so all I can do is hang my head in shame for not having the sixth star this delightful work deserves. HIS GRAYNESS
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Too clever for words, the photo does it all and I got a real giggle out of this one! It's not far off if at all from yours truly so all I can do is hang my head in shame for not having the sixth star this delightful work deserves. HIS GRAYNESS
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thanks
Comment from moongirlwriter
Well all I can say is. . .go out and smell the roses, feel the warm sunshine on your skin or let the misting rain fall on your face and I promise you, your writing will take on a whole new look and be rejuvenated into something spectacular. :)
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Well all I can say is. . .go out and smell the roses, feel the warm sunshine on your skin or let the misting rain fall on your face and I promise you, your writing will take on a whole new look and be rejuvenated into something spectacular. :)
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thanks. It's only a joke.
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Oh good. :)
Comment from Lucian Carter
LOL. Meta-poetry rocks. I've been all but glued to my screen since I discovered Fan Story. So far I don't regret it one bit. I hope it's helping you, even if you become the next Howard Hughes. :)
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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LOL. Meta-poetry rocks. I've been all but glued to my screen since I discovered Fan Story. So far I don't regret it one bit. I hope it's helping you, even if you become the next Howard Hughes. :)
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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I've only been a member for two months and I am addicted and loving it. Thanks for commenting.
