Are You Scared Yet?
Kids on Halloween Night22 total reviews
Comment from Alchera
I personally hate Halloween above all masks celebrating days because of their really dark side! You never know what is the other side of the moon! Believe me many strage things have happened during such horrible feast.Now let's go back to your gorgeous beautiful irregular, different sized stanzaic versification that I have really appreciated and enjoyed throughout its flow and interspaced intervals and sectorial sections. I really loved it! Great work !
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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I personally hate Halloween above all masks celebrating days because of their really dark side! You never know what is the other side of the moon! Believe me many strage things have happened during such horrible feast.Now let's go back to your gorgeous beautiful irregular, different sized stanzaic versification that I have really appreciated and enjoyed throughout its flow and interspaced intervals and sectorial sections. I really loved it! Great work !
Comment Written 17-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
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Thank you. I love writing for kids. From this, I see you have viewed my profile and I appreciate that. Feel free to comment on other works if you?d like. Gramalot8
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You will always be welcomed! We belong to old staff on this site! Blessings? Tony
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a really cute children's Halloween poem, my friend. Very upbeat and moves along nicely. Good luck, nice job! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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This is a really cute children's Halloween poem, my friend. Very upbeat and moves along nicely. Good luck, nice job! ~Kerry
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your review and comments.
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Your welcome.
Comment from jenintorre
A very good Halloween contest entry with very good rhyme and rhythm and a very well chosen illustration. I wish you good luck in the competition,
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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A very good Halloween contest entry with very good rhyme and rhythm and a very well chosen illustration. I wish you good luck in the competition,
Comment Written 03-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a charming and fun Halloween poem, certainly celebrating the season in merry style - well constructed in smooth rhythm and rhyme, and complies perfectly with the prompt - best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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In my opinion, a charming and fun Halloween poem, certainly celebrating the season in merry style - well constructed in smooth rhythm and rhyme, and complies perfectly with the prompt - best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your review and comments.
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You are very welcome...
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Halloween poem for children. Witches like children to come around, they are easy prey when the time is right. Their good pure hearts will not suspect anything until it is too late.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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A very well-written Halloween poem for children. Witches like children to come around, they are easy prey when the time is right. Their good pure hearts will not suspect anything until it is too late.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Do you want to leave a space between the intro stanza and the 'friendly' witch's lines that follow?
You strike a nice balance here between scary and humorous, as the hostess finds more and more things that indicate she my not be quite as nice as she pretends. Nice rhyme and solid anapaestic meter.
Steve
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Do you want to leave a space between the intro stanza and the 'friendly' witch's lines that follow?
You strike a nice balance here between scary and humorous, as the hostess finds more and more things that indicate she my not be quite as nice as she pretends. Nice rhyme and solid anapaestic meter.
Steve
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Thanks for your review, suggestion and comments.
Comment from kahpot
What an excellent poem and read it rhymes and flows wonderfully, I'm glad the Kids got out, yes this a great read very well done and good luck in your competition****kahpot
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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What an excellent poem and read it rhymes and flows wonderfully, I'm glad the Kids got out, yes this a great read very well done and good luck in your competition****kahpot
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your review and comments. I wondered about which direction to go with them getting away or not. I think it's funner this way.... she'll just have to try harder next year. LOL
Comment from B.B. Rose
This is a great Halloween poem -- love all the clever ways you've portrayed the witch through her familiars and her housekeeping. I'm thinking that you might have carried the end of your poem too long. It would be, perhaps, more mysterious without the invite to come again the next year. The ambiguity would cause the reader to consider the fate of the children...did they stay or run away?
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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This is a great Halloween poem -- love all the clever ways you've portrayed the witch through her familiars and her housekeeping. I'm thinking that you might have carried the end of your poem too long. It would be, perhaps, more mysterious without the invite to come again the next year. The ambiguity would cause the reader to consider the fate of the children...did they stay or run away?
Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from lyenochka
I like how you changed the font and color scheme when the witch's voice starts. I think it's worrisome things like real scary people (not necessarily 'witches') and that people don't know their neighbors as well anymore, that kids don't seem to do much trick o' treating lately. Or not in our neighborhood, maybe.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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I like how you changed the font and color scheme when the witch's voice starts. I think it's worrisome things like real scary people (not necessarily 'witches') and that people don't know their neighbors as well anymore, that kids don't seem to do much trick o' treating lately. Or not in our neighborhood, maybe.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your review and comments..
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute Halloween poem for children. You used really good descriptive wording and the imagery is great with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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This is a very cute Halloween poem for children. You used really good descriptive wording and the imagery is great with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your review and comments.
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you are so welcome!
