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haiku 4/7/428 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Hola Guapa, como estas? I know I'm late commenting. But I loved your haiku about autumn setting in. Great satori line. I also like the photo from my favourite city in the whole world. Espero que te encuentras mucho mejor! Any chance that the haiku book will start up again? I miss it. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla:)xx
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Hola Guapa, como estas? I know I'm late commenting. But I loved your haiku about autumn setting in. Great satori line. I also like the photo from my favourite city in the whole world. Espero que te encuentras mucho mejor! Any chance that the haiku book will start up again? I miss it. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla:)xx
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Hola, guapa,
I'm not going to start the challenges but the book is open and you are welcome to add haiku.
Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
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Okay. I will enter haiku poems again. I do hope there will be a second book. Ulla xx
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
I guess you guys up there in the northern hemisphere are having autumn, and you would be feeling the autumn breezes pretty sharp by now in places. How is your health, MariVal? Are you recovering all right? I send you best wishes and hope you are getting on your feet now. By the way, are we having a new challenge soon for the book? Giddy
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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I guess you guys up there in the northern hemisphere are having autumn, and you would be feeling the autumn breezes pretty sharp by now in places. How is your health, MariVal? Are you recovering all right? I send you best wishes and hope you are getting on your feet now. By the way, are we having a new challenge soon for the book? Giddy
Comment Written 07-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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I'm not going to start the challenges but the book is open and you are welcome to add haiku.
Thank you for the review and kind words.
Comment from MizKat
.Hi Gypsy,
I like the poem you've written and the picture you put up with it.
When I'm on my computer I see many trees.
There's a really huge one in my front yard.
Thanks for sharing your poems.
I always enjoy reading them.
Kat
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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.Hi Gypsy,
I like the poem you've written and the picture you put up with it.
When I'm on my computer I see many trees.
There's a really huge one in my front yard.
Thanks for sharing your poems.
I always enjoy reading them.
Kat
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Kat,, I appreciate you took the time to review my poem.
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I always like the things that you write.
I look forward to reading them too.
Kat
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I always look forward to reading your poems. You are wonderful at writing them.
Kat
Comment from Ric Myworld
That old autumn wind moving in, it won't be long for us living in the winter belt to chop up some wood and get the fireplace cleaned out and ready. Then, there are those of us who can talk about the changes of season when the average winter lows are usually in the 40's and the days are in the 60's. I could take those temperatures year 'round. Thanks for another enjoyable poem. :-)
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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That old autumn wind moving in, it won't be long for us living in the winter belt to chop up some wood and get the fireplace cleaned out and ready. Then, there are those of us who can talk about the changes of season when the average winter lows are usually in the 40's and the days are in the 60's. I could take those temperatures year 'round. Thanks for another enjoyable poem. :-)
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Ric,, I appreciate you took the time to review my poem.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Soon the leaves will disappear and we need to make the most of the autumn breezes, an atmospheric write painting a pretty picture from your window in your words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Soon the leaves will disappear and we need to make the most of the autumn breezes, an atmospheric write painting a pretty picture from your window in your words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Dolly,, I appreciate you took the time to review my poem.
Comment from royowen
A nicely compiled haiku, it's always a real challenge to put together something meaniningful in just a few words/syllables, and you've done that right here dear Gypsy, well done, good job, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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A nicely compiled haiku, it's always a real challenge to put together something meaniningful in just a few words/syllables, and you've done that right here dear Gypsy, well done, good job, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Roy,, I appreciate you took the time to review my poem.
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Welcome Gypsy
Comment from krys123
Cheers my friend, Gypsy;
-you are so good at writing haiku's that is amazing of what you creatively come up with from time to time.
-I enjoyed your inventive imagination of your creative and vivid description of the wind and also the personal reference of you watching the wind create a breeze through the trees seemed personal and effective in making the reader feel it also.
-In your satori you also fulfilled the Kigo requirements of a seasonal will reference by using the word autumn. The satori also gives the aha moment necessary for the haiku to fulfill its requirements and gives a spontaneous excitement of the realization of the conceptual theme of your haiku.
-Thanks for sharing this Gypsy and am looking forward to reading more.
Alex
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Cheers my friend, Gypsy;
-you are so good at writing haiku's that is amazing of what you creatively come up with from time to time.
-I enjoyed your inventive imagination of your creative and vivid description of the wind and also the personal reference of you watching the wind create a breeze through the trees seemed personal and effective in making the reader feel it also.
-In your satori you also fulfilled the Kigo requirements of a seasonal will reference by using the word autumn. The satori also gives the aha moment necessary for the haiku to fulfill its requirements and gives a spontaneous excitement of the realization of the conceptual theme of your haiku.
-Thanks for sharing this Gypsy and am looking forward to reading more.
Alex
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Krys,, I appreciate you took the time to review my poem.
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You are very welcome Gypsy.
Alex
Comment from dovemarie
Dear Gypsy, refreshing scene from your window! I felt as though I was in the room looking down to the street. Good coloring for the words, and a cool green background. Dove
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Dear Gypsy, refreshing scene from your window! I felt as though I was in the room looking down to the street. Good coloring for the words, and a cool green background. Dove
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Dove,, I appreciate you took the time to review my poem.
Comment from apky
I can see the trees still pretyy green
But that was not the point of your fine poem
Soon, I guess, that marvellous view
from your window will be all golden,
the trees dropping their leave as they wave in the wind.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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I can see the trees still pretyy green
But that was not the point of your fine poem
Soon, I guess, that marvellous view
from your window will be all golden,
the trees dropping their leave as they wave in the wind.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you, apky,, I appreciate you took the time to review my poem.
Comment from Chrissy710
This could be anywhere and that is why it is so good Iiked this Gypsy Spontaneous and a great Satori Cheers Christine . Sorry I have to expand this as it wont send a short message Which is so annoying as sometimes a short message ia all that is needed Ibhope this is long enough now lOL
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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This could be anywhere and that is why it is so good Iiked this Gypsy Spontaneous and a great Satori Cheers Christine . Sorry I have to expand this as it wont send a short message Which is so annoying as sometimes a short message ia all that is needed Ibhope this is long enough now lOL
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Chrissy,, I appreciate you took the time to review my poem.
