Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This fifteen-syllable poem, Lazy Maid, has the proper amount of syllables and sounds like the day before the classifieds get a new ad for a maid. Let's get this cleaned up.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017

Thank you

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

Sometimes I'm just lazy. I work full time so sometimes I just don't feel like cleaning, however, I'm not a maid and I don't do it for a living. I suppose finding a good maid is like anything, there are good and bad ones

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017

Thanks.for reading.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

I often wonder when I enter a public restroom if men or women are as unsanitary in his/her own home, inconsiderate of the next guy or gal to use it. Hmmmm! Interesting topic. My hope is to have consideration for the next person in line. Marilyn

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017

Thanks for reading.

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hahahahaha this is funny and I mean really truly funny! Fifteen syllables of good fun. I love it and wish you nothing but luck in your contest. Take care xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017

Thank you very much. Glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from marybell1

Exceptional

I just loved your fifteen syllable poem. You followed all the rules for this genre and I liked your choice of sketch.
All the best in the contest.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017

Thank you so much for the 6 star rating. I am delighted.

reply by marybell1 on 06-Oct-2017

You are most welcome.
Marybell1.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

You got the fifteen syllables,
now you need to get a house cleaner
Excellent entry for the contest
you even got a rhyme in there
Good choice of art work
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
RS

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017

Thank you so much.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi there, Anonymous Poet;
thank you for sharing this well written poem of fifteen syllables. The contest called for the limited syllable count, and while it is hard to give a cohesive thought with limited words, you managed to do just that.

Good luck in the contest, (I only wish I had a six for you.)

~patty~
****** (6) stars = EXCEPTIONALLY OUTSTANDING
***** (5) stars = EXCELLENT (Enjoyable to read and NO errors)
****(4) stars = GOOD (Adjustments Needed)
*** (3) stars = Below Average
** (2) stars = BELOW AVG (Needs work)
* (1) star = POOR (MAJOR Revisions needed)

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017

Thank you so much

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written fifteen syllable poem. It is not pleasant to keep telling the maid what she know she should do. To remind them frequently of their duties are very frustrating.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017

Thanks for your comments.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Well, this brief poem has a march-like meter and a little rhyme (sinks, stinks) and is very forthright on what needs to be done. Cute picture to illustrate the poem!

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017

Thank you for your comments.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dear Mystery Poet (wink)

This is a super fun poem and I think it will do super well in the contest voting. *smile* It's definitely the best 15-syllable poem I've seen so far. I'm wishing you a ton of luck! Go get 'em!

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017

Thank you so much Robyn(wink).