Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Bill. Hopefully ducks are smart enough not to follow for the obvious duck blinds (as you suggest here). I enjoyed your quackery. The ducks conversation is clever and amusing. An enjoyable write. Marilyn

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017

Duck 1: Quick, quick, quick.

Duck 2: I'm sorry, but you're speaking too fast. (Get it?)

reply by BeasPeas on 09-Oct-2017

I DO get it and GOT it when I read it. Very clever ducky dialogue.

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

LOL you quack me up. I can't wait to read the next two, so I'll keep this short: were the dummies Canadian dummies? (LOL) My compatriots would never do such a thing...

Wait! Maybe that guy WAS a decoy... He was so pretty... I just thought it was still waters running, you know...

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017

The decoys parts were made in China, assembled in Malaysia, sold to Columbia, smuggled into Mexico, and snuck into the United States by tourists.

reply by Dawn Munro on 09-Oct-2017

Those &%$@! tourists! Trump has it right - build a wall to keep 'em OUT (unless they're rich voters... Then serve 'em $1,000,000,000 a plate lunches - you know, duck soup, duck a l'orange, filet au duck-feet...)

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hahahahahaha, I wish I had a six for this wonderful exchange between your two ducks. It's hilarious, and so spot on. I love it. You have a real talent. Do you know that? Wonderful. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017

Thanks, Ulla, you're very kind. Bill

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

I loved the art work
for these words written
I wonder if they get
something to eat
I liked reading the words as well.

Honey tree

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2017

Thanks, Honeybee

reply by honeytree on 08-Oct-2017

that's fine.

honeytree

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes my friend this is well written again I love the way you introduce the duck language making this a fun piece I enjoyed well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017

Thanks, Mrs P

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

LOL! That was wonderful! I love duck language, I'm trying to learn it!! :)) This is such a fun script, Bill, but I hope they don't go flying into danger, those other ducks, just floating around like dummies! LOL, that's classic! Well done, I loved it. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017

Thanks, Sandra, for the fun review. Bill

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This tells a scene to represent lingual and personal identity that reveals with the art of pronunciation and making sign and speaking dominated by mother tongue, I liked.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017

Thanks, ALD

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

To eat or be eaten. Knowing danger lurks in the nearby vicinity and to not go in the other direction is fool hardy at best. I see that you are determined to work your way through the entire animal kingdom. Good luck to you. I shall continue to read and make comment on your efforts, although sometimes I have to scratch my head in wonderment, (What?) It is okay, you just keep writing.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017

It was either ducks or giraffes.

Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

Hello Bill,

So, I see you moved on to ducks. This is so cute. I think you would get a lot of great ideas with ducks.

I like the dialogue between the ducks. Their thoughts are quick, quick, quick and quack, quack, quack.

Well done!

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017

Thanks , PF.

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hey Bill. Once again your imagination goes ducky! or is that wild ducky? I wondered once, do you sit around and just open up a book and say ok, ducks are next or what? This one was as cute and well written as a once scene script can be! Congrats. xxoo Kiwi

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017

After caterpillars I considered giraffes, elephants, flukes, and geckos. Then my granddaughter said, "Quick, quick, quick!" about something and the first line of this piece occurred to me. So, not a lot of 'pond'ering'.