Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Awww! I'm not sure if this is true or not. In any case for all cancer victims, my heart is with them. I think we must always dance, even if it's not the best dance. It would be a tribute to your friend. Marilyn

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017

Thanks for your comments. It is true that I lost my friend to cancer and it has made an unbearable impact to my life but I do dance whenever I can.

reply by BeasPeas on 02-Oct-2017

I am so sorry to hear that. I did assume it was true. Dancing will be a way to honor her. Marilyn

Comment from angel123

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your 25 words poem. It is well-written with a meaningful message. Your artwork choice goes well with your story and it rhymes well. Best wishes! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017

Thank you

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written 25 Words poem you have penned about your friend having cancer and that is why you can't dance. You used very good wording and good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017

Thank you

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Excellent you have told a very sad story in this brilliant short write great artwork to compliment, these words very well done and good luck in your competition****kahpot

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017

Thank you.