Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

A well worded poem.
Very well done. Concise and makes a strong point.
The message is clear with this one and I completely agree with you.

Sharon

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017

Thanks for the encouraging words, Sharon.

Joan

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

Dragonpoet, I enjoyed reading this poem about making the most of life. It acts as a reminder to live life to the full. If I were to add any suggestion it would be in this line - "Time is taken". It lends itself to the idea that one is taking one's time about things. I would perhaps word it - "Time is spent". Food for thought. Thank you for sharing. ~DD

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017

Thanks for the kind words and high rating. I'll think about the change

dp

Comment from johnwilson

Excellent

This is a beautiful piece. I especially liked" Something ends
A day
A life"
For me, the ending took something away from the rest of the piece. (the part after, So...)

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2017

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Maybe the ending could So you make sure
You really
Live life

dp

reply by johnwilson on 03-Nov-2017

yes

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thanks a good exhortation. Life is so brief and the realization of its brevity causes people to make bucket lists of things to accomplish or experience before the "end." Well done.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I am glad you liked it.

dp

Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

A clever and interesting way you have written the thought process that goes into making a bucket list.
Love the way you have formatted this, which falls beautifully into the realms of a list.
Excellent
Mitchell

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2017

Thanks for the concise review. I appreciate all the stars and the comment on the format being like a list.

Joan

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks about making bucket list of actions to be taken, life goes on, you are instructed to do it all and not to miss anything as per the plan and in view of the list; I liked.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017

Thanks for reading, the kind words and the high rating. All are much appreciated.

dp

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Drag,
This poem is so simple and to the point with a fervent yet quiet plea for people to scratch off everything on their Bucket List. Powerful message. Well done. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017

I am glad you found the poem so rousing. I appreciate all the stars.

dragon

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Joan, This is a very interesting poem about making a bucket list. You used very good wording. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017

Thank you very much.

Joan

Comment from myrosebud

Good

Terse and complete. A simple life lesson to savor every moment.
So many people put off their bucket list until it is too late. Should appeal to the
young. Already too late for us old guys.


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 Comment Written 20-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017

Thanks for the review. What can I do to make in a 5 in your eyes.
It is never to late as long as you are living. I just started fulling my bucket list
by going on a bi-plane and glider ride in the last two months and I am
57 years old. President Bush skydived on his 90th birthday.

dp

reply by myrosebud on 20-Oct-2017

Did not mean to give bad review, I liked it
I am new and no expert and thought 4 was good.

reply by myrosebud on 20-Oct-2017

i will have to bone up on what those numbers mean. Please forgive me

reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017

You rate what ever you feel is right. I think some ideas on how to rate can be found on the site somewhere. You might want to email the site.
Welcome.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Are our bucket lists thwarted by our short life? Mine seems to be endless and I doubt I shall have enough years to fulfill them all, but it's nice to dream, wise resonating and meaningful words here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review. Maybe we should rate the importance of each
item on our bucket list and maybe weed out the ones that really out of our ability to fulfill.

Joan