Perennials of War
Viewing comments for Chapter 46 "Chapter Vierzehn part zwei"Is Anderson a gallant knight? Can he recover Shan
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Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Barbara.
Again I'm one hundred years behind the rest of the world, sorry about that.
"Are you saying if I never attend dinner parties, then I'll never have to host one?" Anderson's eyes widened. "So that's the secret I've been missing." (lol. Sounds like me. Here, even a simple BBQ, without inviting anyone, turns into a 200 people all-nighter and that's just Delia's family.)
"I don't like playing these pompous games." He buttered a biscuit." (I always like the way you just randomly put in what they are doing while they chat. Great skill.)
Another great chapter and I'm hungry now after that menu lol.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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G'day Barbara.
Again I'm one hundred years behind the rest of the world, sorry about that.
"Are you saying if I never attend dinner parties, then I'll never have to host one?" Anderson's eyes widened. "So that's the secret I've been missing." (lol. Sounds like me. Here, even a simple BBQ, without inviting anyone, turns into a 200 people all-nighter and that's just Delia's family.)
"I don't like playing these pompous games." He buttered a biscuit." (I always like the way you just randomly put in what they are doing while they chat. Great skill.)
Another great chapter and I'm hungry now after that menu lol.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 01-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from MTF1955
Nicely written. Liked the way the chapter flowed. Characters were believable and dialogue moved the story forward with ease. Look forward to the next installment. Mary
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Nicely written. Liked the way the chapter flowed. Characters were believable and dialogue moved the story forward with ease. Look forward to the next installment. Mary
Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sasha
I am with Anderson on fancy functions, been to a few and they are not my cup of tea. That said, I am pleased he insisted Shana attend. She obviously still feels like the fifth wheel there. I am sure in time, she will fit in quite nicely.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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I am with Anderson on fancy functions, been to a few and they are not my cup of tea. That said, I am pleased he insisted Shana attend. She obviously still feels like the fifth wheel there. I am sure in time, she will fit in quite nicely.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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With Shana's culture , I have a feeling she's feels an outsider almost everywhere. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rheabug
This is an excellent post for your continuing story. I look forward to each addition and was not disappointed in this part. I did not see any need for editing or correction. Hugs...
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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This is an excellent post for your continuing story. I look forward to each addition and was not disappointed in this part. I did not see any need for editing or correction. Hugs...
Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mbroyles2
Wow that picture made me want to go out and have ice cream.
Then you mention it again in the story along with a dinner party.
Not that I'm much for those kinds of formal things, but it sure sounds fun.
The world needs more Anderson's
Great writing as always.
Michael
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017
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Wow that picture made me want to go out and have ice cream.
Then you mention it again in the story along with a dinner party.
Not that I'm much for those kinds of formal things, but it sure sounds fun.
The world needs more Anderson's
Great writing as always.
Michael
Comment Written 26-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017
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Anderson's not into that himself. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
Sorry I'm so late readin gabout the delightful sounding dinner party and then reading about the call that Philip received from the CPS.
that the CPS has open case against Patricia. (Anderson's ex wife)
Gert
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017
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Hello Barb
Sorry I'm so late readin gabout the delightful sounding dinner party and then reading about the call that Philip received from the CPS.
that the CPS has open case against Patricia. (Anderson's ex wife)
Gert
Comment Written 26-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017
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It's not good for Patricia, bu then it shouldn't be. Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome Barb
Gert
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Barbara, this is coming along beautifully. I loved this part. And guess what I'm having for sweet now!! It looks like one little girl might be coming to live permanently with her daddy, I hope so, that's what he wants, and I'm sure Emily will love it too. Excellent writing again, and I saw no errors. Well done! Sandra xx
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017
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Barbara, this is coming along beautifully. I loved this part. And guess what I'm having for sweet now!! It looks like one little girl might be coming to live permanently with her daddy, I hope so, that's what he wants, and I'm sure Emily will love it too. Excellent writing again, and I saw no errors. Well done! Sandra xx
Comment Written 26-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017
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Anderson does want Emily to live with him. I just hope Shana does too. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Hi Barbara,
Dialogue and interaction between characters work really well, and the variety of intrigue keeps me wanting more..... all in all, an enjoyable read.
Margaret
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017
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Hi Barbara,
Dialogue and interaction between characters work really well, and the variety of intrigue keeps me wanting more..... all in all, an enjoyable read.
Margaret
Comment Written 26-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rtobaygo
Good morning, Barbara
Excellent continuation. I've said this many times before, but the dialogue and casual interactions between your characters were spot on. There's a sense of clam despite the impending storm. Enjoyed.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017
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Good morning, Barbara
Excellent continuation. I've said this many times before, but the dialogue and casual interactions between your characters were spot on. There's a sense of clam despite the impending storm. Enjoyed.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
Comment Written 26-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017
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Thank you for the kind review. It's always calm before the storm. LOL
Comment from Sis Cat
Oh, oh. CPS. I wonder if this had to do with the "parties" Patricia held.
Barbara, you display a creative, steady hand in this chapter. I noticed your storytelling quality and the fine way you weave character, plot, and dialogue. I feel the social obligations that burden Anderson. I also sense a pseudo family forming. Jane is like a doting mother figure reminding me of Alice in The Brady Bunch and many housekeepers going back for generations of books and cinema. Emily is the daughter figure, and Anderson and Shana are the couple.
I also notice that you pace and vary the subjects of chapters. Some are about the painting. Others are about family and relationships, and still others are about wealth and society. Sometimes you mix all of these themes in a single chapter, keeping things interesting.
I found no spags; just polished, engaging writing.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017
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Oh, oh. CPS. I wonder if this had to do with the "parties" Patricia held.
Barbara, you display a creative, steady hand in this chapter. I noticed your storytelling quality and the fine way you weave character, plot, and dialogue. I feel the social obligations that burden Anderson. I also sense a pseudo family forming. Jane is like a doting mother figure reminding me of Alice in The Brady Bunch and many housekeepers going back for generations of books and cinema. Emily is the daughter figure, and Anderson and Shana are the couple.
I also notice that you pace and vary the subjects of chapters. Some are about the painting. Others are about family and relationships, and still others are about wealth and society. Sometimes you mix all of these themes in a single chapter, keeping things interesting.
I found no spags; just polished, engaging writing.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017
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Thank you for the encouragement. I appreciate it.
