Alphabet- Loop (A-Z)
An Unrhymed Loop Poem47 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
I enjoyed the read of this poem. I found it so true to our world today.
My favorite line is "Together as one we must grow united". We need this
to happen so much! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork
goes well with the words of this poem.
Hope you had a great weekend!....Maria
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I enjoyed the read of this poem. I found it so true to our world today.
My favorite line is "Together as one we must grow united". We need this
to happen so much! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork
goes well with the words of this poem.
Hope you had a great weekend!....Maria
Comment Written 21-May-2023
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent job combining two types of poem forms and did it well. I like the topic. Well done, kym.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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Excellent job combining two types of poem forms and did it well. I like the topic. Well done, kym.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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Thank you for your excellent comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Congrats on your second place win in the haiku contest. This unrhymed loop is even more skilfully achieved in its alphabetical form which really didn't feel at all forced. The message is a strong one that we should unite together to enable change and recovery from "devastation unwanted on God's given earth." Well done. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Congrats on your second place win in the haiku contest. This unrhymed loop is even more skilfully achieved in its alphabetical form which really didn't feel at all forced. The message is a strong one that we should unite together to enable change and recovery from "devastation unwanted on God's given earth." Well done. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 20-May-2023
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Thank you and congratulations on your placing, this loop though tricky was fun to get through, yes we do need to take better care of our world, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from jessizero
I am impressed that you combined these two types of poems, and you did a great job! Your poem had a great message, as well. Thank you so much for sharing this poem here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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I am impressed that you combined these two types of poems, and you did a great job! Your poem had a great message, as well. Thank you so much for sharing this poem here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 20-May-2023
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Thank you so very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is beautifully done, kahpot. I love the organization and admire the work you've put into this (then and now). But its meaning is special in many hearts and will resonate deeply. Thank you for the share! Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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This is beautifully done, kahpot. I love the organization and admire the work you've put into this (then and now). But its meaning is special in many hearts and will resonate deeply. Thank you for the share! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 20-May-2023
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Thank you very much, yes it took some time but I enjoyed it, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I applaud this submission. It must have been a challenge to write a line for twenty-six letters and maintain the integrity of the loop, but that said, "Yo, Adrian. We did it!" ( quote of Rocky Balboa.
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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I applaud this submission. It must have been a challenge to write a line for twenty-six letters and maintain the integrity of the loop, but that said, "Yo, Adrian. We did it!" ( quote of Rocky Balboa.
Comment Written 20-May-2023
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Thank you very much, though I'm not yet a champ, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Wendy G
Wow, I like this a lot! An alphabet poem is hard enough, and so is a loop poem. You have combined them well and meaningfully in an unforced way. My only suggestion is to replace " Jesus has given His sight" to "Jesus has given His life". Otherwise, very creative, original and an important and meaningful theme.
Wendy
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Wow, I like this a lot! An alphabet poem is hard enough, and so is a loop poem. You have combined them well and meaningfully in an unforced way. My only suggestion is to replace " Jesus has given His sight" to "Jesus has given His life". Otherwise, very creative, original and an important and meaningful theme.
Wendy
Comment Written 20-May-2023
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Thank you for your exceptional comments and six stars, yes, I had some fun organizing this one, and yes, we do need to do a better job looking after our world, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Regina Elliott
Dear Poet, this is an outstanding loop poem. Yes,
our earth definitely needs
some tender loving care from
it's human inhabitants.The
people need to harmonize
instead of isolating each
other because of differences
in race, political views, etc.
Fine writing, have a blessed
weekend. ~
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Dear Poet, this is an outstanding loop poem. Yes,
our earth definitely needs
some tender loving care from
it's human inhabitants.The
people need to harmonize
instead of isolating each
other because of differences
in race, political views, etc.
Fine writing, have a blessed
weekend. ~
Comment Written 20-May-2023
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Thank you so very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from AP Apgar
What an excellent job- going through the alphabet- alphabet listening the many things that Mother Nature and the inhabitants of God's earth have endured through time at the hands of those who would destroy it selfishly- good job - Bless AP
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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What an excellent job- going through the alphabet- alphabet listening the many things that Mother Nature and the inhabitants of God's earth have endured through time at the hands of those who would destroy it selfishly- good job - Bless AP
Comment Written 19-May-2023
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Thank you AP. it was fun trying this again, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
This is a lovely loop poem reminding us of creation's vision and our role in healing earth's scars. In six years this poem has become more relevant than ever. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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This is a lovely loop poem reminding us of creation's vision and our role in healing earth's scars. In six years this poem has become more relevant than ever. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-May-2023
reply by the author on 20-May-2023
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Thank you very much, yes, I edit it to give an updated idea of our situation, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
