Spider Web
Nature 5-7-53 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a lovely 5-7-5 nature poem and I like the concept. This is one of the nicest entries, but my suggestion is to change "on" to "with" in the second line: "glints with early morning dew"
The dew glints on the spider web, not the other way around. Marilyn
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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This is a lovely 5-7-5 nature poem and I like the concept. This is one of the nicest entries, but my suggestion is to change "on" to "with" in the second line: "glints with early morning dew"
The dew glints on the spider web, not the other way around. Marilyn
Comment Written 19-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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Thanks for a superb review zanya
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You are welcome, Zanya. :)
Comment from fluffnstuff
I think this is great....what an imagination you have...and written great...good luck if this is a contest entry....................................................................................fluff
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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I think this is great....what an imagination you have...and written great...good luck if this is a contest entry....................................................................................fluff
Comment Written 18-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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I am honored with these 6 twinkling stars- thanks for the encouraging review zanya
Comment from mermaids
Spider webs can be so beautiful and your words capture their beauty. I like the line "like autumnal lace". It shows how beautiful nature can be and how artful the spider's web is. Excellent haiku form.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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Spider webs can be so beautiful and your words capture their beauty. I like the line "like autumnal lace". It shows how beautiful nature can be and how artful the spider's web is. Excellent haiku form.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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Thanks for a superb review zanya
