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It's in your hands...19 total reviews
Comment from mediumhead
I love this. It fits perfectly and it also really made me think. It could be absolutely anything I want it to be. I will actually be thinking about this.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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I love this. It fits perfectly and it also really made me think. It could be absolutely anything I want it to be. I will actually be thinking about this.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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Thank you so very much for the glowing 6 stars, my friend, I appreciate it. I'm happy you enjoyed this.
Comment from fastdigits
You tell a story in but eight syllables in words
written in black and white as to the outcome
in life, decisions good or bad, a blessing or
a curse, that it all comes down to you alone.
Well done
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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You tell a story in but eight syllables in words
written in black and white as to the outcome
in life, decisions good or bad, a blessing or
a curse, that it all comes down to you alone.
Well done
Comment Written 08-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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Thank you so very much, my friend. I appreciate your kind comments.
Comment from nbonner
We do have choices to choose the right or wrong path, we just have to be able to recognize it. Nicely written 2-4-2 poem. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest. N.B
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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We do have choices to choose the right or wrong path, we just have to be able to recognize it. Nicely written 2-4-2 poem. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest. N.B
Comment Written 08-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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Thank you so very much.
Comment from Thal1959
I am not much into the real brief poetic forms. This is very nicely done about an existential situation. We are all faced with the angel and devil within us. Good luck.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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I am not much into the real brief poetic forms. This is very nicely done about an existential situation. We are all faced with the angel and devil within us. Good luck.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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Thank you so very much, my friend.
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You"re welcome, again, Kerry - it was my pleasure.
Comment from angel123
Your poem gives an excellent thought provoking message about the choice between good and evil. I enjoyed reading it and your artwork choice is wonderful.
angel123
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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Your poem gives an excellent thought provoking message about the choice between good and evil. I enjoyed reading it and your artwork choice is wonderful.
angel123
Comment Written 08-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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Thank you so very much, I appreciate it.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author
Now aren't you clever with telling us with your three
line poem it's in your hands if you desire to chose good or evil
Good choose for the picture to bring out the meaning of your fine entry.
Gert
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Hello author
Now aren't you clever with telling us with your three
line poem it's in your hands if you desire to chose good or evil
Good choose for the picture to bring out the meaning of your fine entry.
Gert
Comment Written 07-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Thank you so very much, Gert, I truly appreciate your kind comments,
Comment from emptypage
This one's a thinker, which I like. And I'm thinking the dark side looks pretty scary from here. Wouldn't we all choose a blessing over a curse? Wait, wait---no. We all wouldn't. But I'll never get why. Even though I've chosen the curse a few times myself.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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This one's a thinker, which I like. And I'm thinking the dark side looks pretty scary from here. Wouldn't we all choose a blessing over a curse? Wait, wait---no. We all wouldn't. But I'll never get why. Even though I've chosen the curse a few times myself.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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lol, Thank you so very much, my friend, I appreciate it.
Comment from Commando
An awesome message! A whole bunch said, in only 7-words. The Artwork is stunning! Your writing is commendable, "mystery poet." Best wishes for a
win. Most deserving! Best wishes for a happy journey through life.
Bill (Junglefighter)
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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An awesome message! A whole bunch said, in only 7-words. The Artwork is stunning! Your writing is commendable, "mystery poet." Best wishes for a
win. Most deserving! Best wishes for a happy journey through life.
Bill (Junglefighter)
Comment Written 07-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Thank you so very much for the wonderful review and stars. I certainly appreciate your kind comments as well:))
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You earned it, "mystery poet!" The truth is so easy to write, "when its true!" Best wishes, and "God bless!"
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Thank you so very much, that';s very kind.
Comment from Margaret Ford
Blessing or curse. Well, this is a difficult decision to encounter so early in the morning. I think I'll pass. But your poem is clever and witty -- and actually made me chuckle in spite of the hour. This is difficult to do with just the 2-4-2 syllable count. Congratulations on a job well done. This is a six. Margaret
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Blessing or curse. Well, this is a difficult decision to encounter so early in the morning. I think I'll pass. But your poem is clever and witty -- and actually made me chuckle in spite of the hour. This is difficult to do with just the 2-4-2 syllable count. Congratulations on a job well done. This is a six. Margaret
Comment Written 07-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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lol, Thank you so very much, Margret. You just gave me a chuckle, lol I appreciate the 6 stars, my friend.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Well being so short it is hard to write a full review but you did get an amazing point over in just a few words bravo for that this is very wise! I wish you all the luck in the competition well done and kindest regards Meia x
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Well being so short it is hard to write a full review but you did get an amazing point over in just a few words bravo for that this is very wise! I wish you all the luck in the competition well done and kindest regards Meia x
Comment Written 07-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Thank you so very much Meia, I appreciate your kind comments.
