Fixing Lunch
Brother and sister18 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
we reminisce of time when children grow up and come home for visits. we relish the moments knowing the will soon be over once again.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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we reminisce of time when children grow up and come home for visits. we relish the moments knowing the will soon be over once again.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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Thank you for reading my work, dear country ranch writer.
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Smiles
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a very nicely composed poem. It reminds me of my own kids, of course. Even as adults their conversation makes me wistful of their childhood days. Thanks for refreshing that memory. Marilyn
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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This is a very nicely composed poem. It reminds me of my own kids, of course. Even as adults their conversation makes me wistful of their childhood days. Thanks for refreshing that memory. Marilyn
Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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Thank you, Marilyn.
Comment from nbonner
Being a mother can be such a joy. Being a mother myself it's sometimes hard to watch your kids grow up. But I can say one thing, you are never done being a mother. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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Being a mother can be such a joy. Being a mother myself it's sometimes hard to watch your kids grow up. But I can say one thing, you are never done being a mother. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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Thank you for reading my work.
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Hi
What a wonderful poem.
Which describes this family scene with such vivid imagination.
The lovely lines are fantastic which marries with your imagery brilliantly.
and a great picture to accompany
Mitchell.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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Hi
What a wonderful poem.
Which describes this family scene with such vivid imagination.
The lovely lines are fantastic which marries with your imagery brilliantly.
and a great picture to accompany
Mitchell.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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Thank you, Mitchell.
Comment from Poetic Friend
Welcome back, Amada, my poetic friend. I miss your poetic voice.
I love the poem. It speaks of brother and sister relationship. Also, the mother's role is prevalent in the poem.
These are nostalgic memories of children at home and at play on a rainy days, finding ways to entertain themselves. The mother is relishing all those precious moments.
Thank you of sharing such an endearing poem.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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Welcome back, Amada, my poetic friend. I miss your poetic voice.
I love the poem. It speaks of brother and sister relationship. Also, the mother's role is prevalent in the poem.
These are nostalgic memories of children at home and at play on a rainy days, finding ways to entertain themselves. The mother is relishing all those precious moments.
Thank you of sharing such an endearing poem.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your lovely comments, Poetic Friend.
Comment from Heather Knight
It was lovely to read how this mother reminisced while watching and listening to their now grown-up children.
Your poem is simple but heart-warming. I like it.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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It was lovely to read how this mother reminisced while watching and listening to their now grown-up children.
Your poem is simple but heart-warming. I like it.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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Thank you for reading a part of my story.
Comment from RGstar
Lovely, absolutely lovely. Ones feels the bond and appreciation of family and the simple things that mean so much in the long run. A hearty write that is perfect for a Sunday morning.
''All grown up now
But with the twirl and wisp
Of their younger years
Their childhood chuckle remains--
Race cars, dolls, and lollipops.''
How wonderful!
Well done.
My best wishes. Have a lovely day, and may this continue.
RGstar
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Lovely, absolutely lovely. Ones feels the bond and appreciation of family and the simple things that mean so much in the long run. A hearty write that is perfect for a Sunday morning.
''All grown up now
But with the twirl and wisp
Of their younger years
Their childhood chuckle remains--
Race cars, dolls, and lollipops.''
How wonderful!
Well done.
My best wishes. Have a lovely day, and may this continue.
RGstar
Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Oh...such a surprise! I was hoping you read my work; you always have something positive to say.. This is my first posting of the year! Slowly, gradually, rising up!
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You rise up, Amada. Always a pleasure
Comment from Pullmanspb
This poem has a lovely and commendable ending; my favorite part of raucous, loving recollection of a task often under-appreciated.
Steven
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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This poem has a lovely and commendable ending; my favorite part of raucous, loving recollection of a task often under-appreciated.
Steven
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2017
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Thank you for reading my work.
Comment from Joan E.
It was good to see your name pop up and a lovely coincidence too. We are in Ashland, Oregon for the Shakespeare Festival, and our son had lunch with a friend here, who is moving to Seattle today.
I enjoyed your sharing nostalgia in this free verse, along with the wonderful descriptions like "twirl and wisp". Here's to continuing your search... Hugs and have a serene weekend- Joan
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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It was good to see your name pop up and a lovely coincidence too. We are in Ashland, Oregon for the Shakespeare Festival, and our son had lunch with a friend here, who is moving to Seattle today.
I enjoyed your sharing nostalgia in this free verse, along with the wonderful descriptions like "twirl and wisp". Here's to continuing your search... Hugs and have a serene weekend- Joan
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your warm words and well wishes. Maybe one year you could come to visit me here in WA State, we are not very far.
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Many thanks for the invitation and enjoy your Sunday. Smiles- Joan
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend this is well written when your children grow up and become adults it leaves a feeling of emptiness in the home when they return this is lifted and brings the home to life once more even the smallest task is a pleasure even cooking them lunch I enjoyed well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Hello my friend this is well written when your children grow up and become adults it leaves a feeling of emptiness in the home when they return this is lifted and brings the home to life once more even the smallest task is a pleasure even cooking them lunch I enjoyed well done regards Jill
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Thank you Jill. Wonderful feeling to have to kids back, for a while :-)
