Righting Writing
This won't hurt me more than you32 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Montanino
Oh, my gosh! I laughed all through your piece. It's so funny and like the worst kind of nightmare when we think we are such great writers. You've received the recognized blue ribbon and well deserved!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Oh, my gosh! I laughed all through your piece. It's so funny and like the worst kind of nightmare when we think we are such great writers. You've received the recognized blue ribbon and well deserved!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019
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Thanks but I?m wondering how you happened to review that particular piece?
I forgot about it but remember now what fun it was to write. Thanks for reviewing and also reminding me of a good time.
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Well I went into fan story and found it somewhere in there. I loved it. So funny!
Comment from Janet Foor
I love your subtle humor Dennis. Unfortunately, some of what you say is close to things that happen here on FanStory.
I always appreciate your writing and this is no exception.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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I love your subtle humor Dennis. Unfortunately, some of what you say is close to things that happen here on FanStory.
I always appreciate your writing and this is no exception.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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LOL oh yes there's a lot of experience behind that post including my own goofs. Thanks and God bless you Janet!
Comment from kathleenspalding
LOL Good one! Excellent Revenge Review is perfect for the contest and fits the prompt. VERY well written - gave me a good mental picture of the 'post' you are 'reviewing'.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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LOL Good one! Excellent Revenge Review is perfect for the contest and fits the prompt. VERY well written - gave me a good mental picture of the 'post' you are 'reviewing'.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Thank you, very much appreciated! Dennis
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You're welcome.
Comment from Mabaker
No true Fanstorian would ever engage in such revengeful writing. In a pigs eye they wouldn't. I've been ripped uphill and down dale by some Fanstorians! It nearly broke my writing heart on a couple of occasions, I had to unfriend one man as he started sending me twenty posts a day on Facebook, "If I would let Jesus into my heart, and accept his advice on my lack of writing skills, I would become a far better writer."
I'll give you six for telling it like it sometimes is. Sincerely Anne.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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No true Fanstorian would ever engage in such revengeful writing. In a pigs eye they wouldn't. I've been ripped uphill and down dale by some Fanstorians! It nearly broke my writing heart on a couple of occasions, I had to unfriend one man as he started sending me twenty posts a day on Facebook, "If I would let Jesus into my heart, and accept his advice on my lack of writing skills, I would become a far better writer."
I'll give you six for telling it like it sometimes is. Sincerely Anne.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Thanks Anne AKA Mabaker. the 'true Fanstorian" remark was mostly tongue in cheek. :) Dennis
Comment from Spitfire
Ha,ha. I suspect it would take the writer a long time to figure out this was an insult. Very subtle. You start with the compliment of proper spacing. You also manage to make run-on sentences a good thing. My favorite slam is the two paragraphs on commas and your similes.
Clever message on the funerals.
The ending even makes it sound as if you're doing him a favor.
This deserves a six, but I have none left. A vote will have to do instead. Super CK. Maybe I'll sew a blue cape for you. X0X
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Ha,ha. I suspect it would take the writer a long time to figure out this was an insult. Very subtle. You start with the compliment of proper spacing. You also manage to make run-on sentences a good thing. My favorite slam is the two paragraphs on commas and your similes.
Clever message on the funerals.
The ending even makes it sound as if you're doing him a favor.
This deserves a six, but I have none left. A vote will have to do instead. Super CK. Maybe I'll sew a blue cape for you. X0X
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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A good word from you is better than a six star review anytime...but don't let it happen again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
A new cape would be nice...this ones about worn out from saving damsels in distress...but then, what's a superhero to do?
Thanks for the vote! Much appreciated along with the 5 stars...CK feeling like SM.
Comment from l.raven
HI Dennis, LOL...this is so funny my friend...my problem is when a newbie comes in...I think their reviews shouldn't count for a few weeks...not to be mean...but they do take away from our rating...and they don't know what they are doing...sigh...but good thing is...they do learn...I love your story told you...made me smile...very well written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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HI Dennis, LOL...this is so funny my friend...my problem is when a newbie comes in...I think their reviews shouldn't count for a few weeks...not to be mean...but they do take away from our rating...and they don't know what they are doing...sigh...but good thing is...they do learn...I love your story told you...made me smile...very well written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Yes, newbies should be on probation as you so wisely suggest. Thx!
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just for a short time...your so welcome...xxoo love
Comment from jmdg1954
I read a few of these "revenge" posts in this contest, and by far yours has been the best.
Well written and shared. Best of luck in the contest.
John
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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I read a few of these "revenge" posts in this contest, and by far yours has been the best.
Well written and shared. Best of luck in the contest.
John
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Thanks friend!
Comment from smileycloud
yes, of course, you certainly can meet the prompt requirement very well
as you say fiction is our writing intent for the most aprt
if we cannot make up a good revenge story, like this one, then we would have to all become news reporters of fact only
you have done very well
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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yes, of course, you certainly can meet the prompt requirement very well
as you say fiction is our writing intent for the most aprt
if we cannot make up a good revenge story, like this one, then we would have to all become news reporters of fact only
you have done very well
have a smiley day
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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:)day
Comment from sibhus
Ha, ha, this was a riot. The line about granny and the bills was priceless, though I should be offended, because granny did die and left me with all of her bills. Huh, I guess I am a Redneck. It was very witty and really does stress the point in a humorous way. Good stuff.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Ha, ha, this was a riot. The line about granny and the bills was priceless, though I should be offended, because granny did die and left me with all of her bills. Huh, I guess I am a Redneck. It was very witty and really does stress the point in a humorous way. Good stuff.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Thanks, glad you got a chuckle out of it!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a good lesson suggesting the tips for writing the right in a righteous order to help author to improve in their skill showing their mistakes positively appreciably like a bloodless kill while revenge reviewing is never recommended at any level or end; I liked.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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This speaks a good lesson suggesting the tips for writing the right in a righteous order to help author to improve in their skill showing their mistakes positively appreciably like a bloodless kill while revenge reviewing is never recommended at any level or end; I liked.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Glad you liked it!
