Torchlight
5-7-5 Contest Entry28 total reviews
Comment from MissMerri
A dazzling little poem, Mikey. I liked it very much, and have a feeling it will do very well in this contest. I like the contrast of endless galaxies with your lady love, who outshines them all. What a charming compliment!
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A dazzling little poem, Mikey. I liked it very much, and have a feeling it will do very well in this contest. I like the contrast of endless galaxies with your lady love, who outshines them all. What a charming compliment!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
Comment from Pearl Edwards
How lovely, and truly romantic too. Great artwork of the starlit galaxies, dazzling, but
I only see you - well done with this 5-7-5 mikey good luck in the contest.
cheers
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How lovely, and truly romantic too. Great artwork of the starlit galaxies, dazzling, but
I only see you - well done with this 5-7-5 mikey good luck in the contest.
cheers
Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
Comment from smileycloud
how very romantic
also very imaginative and stylishly elegant in it's interpretation of the skies
lovely presentation as well
good luck in the contest
have a smiley day
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how very romantic
also very imaginative and stylishly elegant in it's interpretation of the skies
lovely presentation as well
good luck in the contest
have a smiley day
Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-Imagery is effective in lines one and two.
-I like the theme of the stars and galaxies.
-But amidst all of that, you only see her;
a good ending.
-Good luck in the contest.
*Sorry the original contest idea didn't
work out, but you tried, and that is what counts.
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-Imagery is effective in lines one and two.
-I like the theme of the stars and galaxies.
-But amidst all of that, you only see her;
a good ending.
-Good luck in the contest.
*Sorry the original contest idea didn't
work out, but you tried, and that is what counts.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
Comment from kathleenspalding
Very nice five - seven -five create a strong mental image and conveys an understandable message using very few words. Great job!
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Very nice five - seven -five create a strong mental image and conveys an understandable message using very few words. Great job!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
Comment from rheabug
This is an excellent poem for the contest. I enjoyed reading it and loved the picture that you chose for this presentation. I stumble on your work by accident and am so happy that I did. Thank you for sharing. HUGS...
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This is an excellent poem for the contest. I enjoyed reading it and loved the picture that you chose for this presentation. I stumble on your work by accident and am so happy that I did. Thank you for sharing. HUGS...
Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
Comment from BOO ghost
Knew this was your poem before I saw you name. You got your own signature. yep, seen a couple of these today. is dangerous to tell Lion King to write about anything, he -- he. Opens a heap of doors. Creative tittle. Presentation is out of this world. that is romantic dedication. dazzling. good luck in the contest. BOO may be watching. BOO-tastic!
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Knew this was your poem before I saw you name. You got your own signature. yep, seen a couple of these today. is dangerous to tell Lion King to write about anything, he -- he. Opens a heap of doors. Creative tittle. Presentation is out of this world. that is romantic dedication. dazzling. good luck in the contest. BOO may be watching. BOO-tastic!
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Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
Comment from Susanjohn
Aw Mikey, I really like this...loving the way it feels...and the picture, perfect! Totally fits this lovely little poem! Good luck in the contest. :-))
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Aw Mikey, I really like this...loving the way it feels...and the picture, perfect! Totally fits this lovely little poem! Good luck in the contest. :-))
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
Comment from lyenochka
Great picture, presentation, formatting and words! Even with the beauty of the stars, the poet says, "I only see you." Can there any greater honor and compliment?
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Great picture, presentation, formatting and words! Even with the beauty of the stars, the poet says, "I only see you." Can there any greater honor and compliment?
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a very inspiring contest entry. It's romantic but totally innocent. I really enjoyed reading this poem. I wish I had a six for it but I am out for the week. Good luck, but I doubt you will need it.
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This is a very inspiring contest entry. It's romantic but totally innocent. I really enjoyed reading this poem. I wish I had a six for it but I am out for the week. Good luck, but I doubt you will need it.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
