Whene'er It Rains
a sad romantic poem18 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Rod. This is a charming poem of love in the rain. Holding the umbrella together is a romantic gesture. Rain has the power to draw people cozily closer. Congratulations for winning first with this fine entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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Hi Rod. This is a charming poem of love in the rain. Holding the umbrella together is a romantic gesture. Rain has the power to draw people cozily closer. Congratulations for winning first with this fine entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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I am delighted you like this poem so much, Marilyn. I love rainy days, so this one was fun to write. Thank you for your kind praise and the congrats. Rod
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a memoir, an experience expressed of love and romantic fun and moment of dreamy lovers in a rainy and untoward weather; I liked the feeling shared.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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This is a memoir, an experience expressed of love and romantic fun and moment of dreamy lovers in a rainy and untoward weather; I liked the feeling shared.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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A nostalgic memoir to be sure. Thank you so much, Alcreator, for sharing my poem and your kind praise. Rod
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was lovely, and sad, and a worthy winner. Congratulations. I liked the rhyme scheme, I can only describe it as 'broken' just like the weather and the emotion behind the words. I don't have a six left but it is deserving of one. Well done, it was a pleasure to read. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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That was lovely, and sad, and a worthy winner. Congratulations. I liked the rhyme scheme, I can only describe it as 'broken' just like the weather and the emotion behind the words. I don't have a six left but it is deserving of one. Well done, it was a pleasure to read. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind praise of "Whene'er It Rains," Sandra, and the virtual six is much appreciated. Rod
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You are very welcome, Rod. x
Comment from patcelaw
I like this very much. Congrats on winning the contest. There is something special about a rainy day with the one we love. Watching the lightning and hearing the thunder can be romantic for sure,, Patricia
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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I like this very much. Congrats on winning the contest. There is something special about a rainy day with the one we love. Watching the lightning and hearing the thunder can be romantic for sure,, Patricia
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Indeed there is something special about a rainy day with the one we love. Thank you so much for sharing "Whene'er It Rains" Patricia, and your kind praise. Rod
Comment from nbonner
Love is such a cherished and has such passion between two loved ones. I believe if you can find your're soul mate in life then you have accomplishment a great achievement. thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Love is such a cherished and has such passion between two loved ones. I believe if you can find your're soul mate in life then you have accomplishment a great achievement. thanks for sharing
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Yes, I think the lovers here were soul mates. Thank you for sharing "Whene'er It Rains." Rod
Comment from ruzu27
Congratulations to the winner of the contest! I think you deserve to be the first in the competition Romance vs Bad Weather. Your poem is well-penned, I like it. Also the artwork you have chosen complements your words perfectly well.
I think I can only say "I betI think of you again whene'er it rains."
Blessings,
Ruth
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Congratulations to the winner of the contest! I think you deserve to be the first in the competition Romance vs Bad Weather. Your poem is well-penned, I like it. Also the artwork you have chosen complements your words perfectly well.
I think I can only say "I betI think of you again whene'er it rains."
Blessings,
Ruth
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much, Ruth, for the congrats and your very kind praise. Rod
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You are welcome.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written romance vs bad weather poem. The most romantic moments we can not forget easily. A walk in bad weather close to each other is a moment that both can cherish for a lifetime.
Congratulations on winning the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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A very well-written romance vs bad weather poem. The most romantic moments we can not forget easily. A walk in bad weather close to each other is a moment that both can cherish for a lifetime.
Congratulations on winning the contest.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Thank you, Sandra, for sharing "Where're It Rains" and your very kind praise. Rod
Comment from June Sargent
Wistful, but beautiful poem about a long-ago romance that comes to life whenever it rains. Can easily see why it's a winner (I did vote for you). Sentiments eloquently expressed in a way that draws the reader in. Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Wistful, but beautiful poem about a long-ago romance that comes to life whenever it rains. Can easily see why it's a winner (I did vote for you). Sentiments eloquently expressed in a way that draws the reader in. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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I am delighted you were drawn in by my nostalgic romance poem, June. I truly appreciate your voting for it and your very kind praise.
Comment from pome lover
what a lovely remembrance - beautifully and lyrically written.
A treat to read of fond memories, though the piece is sad.
I bet she loved the poetry you wrote to her when she was alive. At least I hope you did, with your talent.
very nice!
pome lover
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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what a lovely remembrance - beautifully and lyrically written.
A treat to read of fond memories, though the piece is sad.
I bet she loved the poetry you wrote to her when she was alive. At least I hope you did, with your talent.
very nice!
pome lover
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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I am so pleased you enjoyed this remembrance of love shared long ago. Thank you, pome lover, for your very kind praise. Rod
Comment from bertranclan
Well, I can see why you were the contest winner! Your poem reminds me of a post-impression painting I have in my own home. It flows nicely, and has some really good images. A wonderful read. Congratulations!
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Well, I can see why you were the contest winner! Your poem reminds me of a post-impression painting I have in my own home. It flows nicely, and has some really good images. A wonderful read. Congratulations!
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much for sharing my poem and your kind praise. Rod
