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Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Section 5 - Part 3: Exhumed"Cody's worst nightmare from Hell becomes reality!
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Comment from Asem.inspirations
Hello Brett: It's great to see that Cody is standing up to his bullies and not taking any crap from anyone. That bully had it coming - accusing Cody of one day becoming just like his bio-dad. In most cases of abuse and extreme abuse the horror of it all will make the kid or break the kid. I believe that his horrible abuses from Earl will make Cody a stronger person, one not capable of repeating the abuses on others. I am happy though that he is strong enough and angry enough to stand up to his bullies.
I was happy to hear some of Cody's thinking and his memories of the women who frequented with Earl, also the torturing of the other animals. It really helps me to clear up nay misunderstandings of how disgustingly horrible Earl teally is and was.
I am still following this story - It really has me eager to see what will happen next. You are an exceptional writer.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Hello Brett: It's great to see that Cody is standing up to his bullies and not taking any crap from anyone. That bully had it coming - accusing Cody of one day becoming just like his bio-dad. In most cases of abuse and extreme abuse the horror of it all will make the kid or break the kid. I believe that his horrible abuses from Earl will make Cody a stronger person, one not capable of repeating the abuses on others. I am happy though that he is strong enough and angry enough to stand up to his bullies.
I was happy to hear some of Cody's thinking and his memories of the women who frequented with Earl, also the torturing of the other animals. It really helps me to clear up nay misunderstandings of how disgustingly horrible Earl teally is and was.
I am still following this story - It really has me eager to see what will happen next. You are an exceptional writer.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is a gruesome story anyone who would torture a cat., or any animal for that matter deserves to be shot. I think of what Michael Vick did to his dogs and I can't believe he has been hired by ESPN.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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This is a gruesome story anyone who would torture a cat., or any animal for that matter deserves to be shot. I think of what Michael Vick did to his dogs and I can't believe he has been hired by ESPN.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Dog fighting, cat mowing, it's all the same and has no place in society.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from bookishfabler
I see a little of your story in Cody's story. I don't know why I haven't followed it before.
"Animals are nothing more than stupid, worthless, critters that need to be eliminated, like you!" Earl Anthony Schroder repeatedly told him each time he terminated one of them. (I hate him already. )
hugs Heidi
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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I see a little of your story in Cody's story. I don't know why I haven't followed it before.
"Animals are nothing more than stupid, worthless, critters that need to be eliminated, like you!" Earl Anthony Schroder repeatedly told him each time he terminated one of them. (I hate him already. )
hugs Heidi
Comment Written 30-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Mistydawn
This is a great story, very well-written, the description word choice was perfect. It was just enough for the reader to see what's going on but too much that it slows the story. The dialogue seems natural what the characters would say. The characters, especially Cody really came to life. Great job.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
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This is a great story, very well-written, the description word choice was perfect. It was just enough for the reader to see what's going on but too much that it slows the story. The dialogue seems natural what the characters would say. The characters, especially Cody really came to life. Great job.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Cody wanted to know.(") not needed there
He has had enough and I love the little man her is turning into. Very well done addition to the continuing story.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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Cody wanted to know.(") not needed there
He has had enough and I love the little man her is turning into. Very well done addition to the continuing story.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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As always much appreciate your support.
Comment from Rasmine
Good chapter, and now onto the next.
Good character development. I really like Cody, and I loved this part best:
Without a word, Cody walked over to where Spencer stood on the curb tormenting him. He cocked his right arm back as far as he could and cleaned the bully's clock! The aggravator did not see the punch coming until it was too late to avoid the blow. It landed flush on Spencer's nose and knocked him on his kiester.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Good chapter, and now onto the next.
Good character development. I really like Cody, and I loved this part best:
Without a word, Cody walked over to where Spencer stood on the curb tormenting him. He cocked his right arm back as far as he could and cleaned the bully's clock! The aggravator did not see the punch coming until it was too late to avoid the blow. It landed flush on Spencer's nose and knocked him on his kiester.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
I wanted to illustrate how to deal with a bully.
Seems I achieved my purpose with this chapter.
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Yeah, but in my Flower Power stories I deal with it differently, but then again it's dealing with playground bullies not a child molester.
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Oh wait, it was this one. Yeah, this is one way, but if I want these books to get into the school system it can't be violent.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is beautifully written, Brett, and I'm going to have to catch up a bit as I'll be reading it from now on. Is the first book published? If it is I'll go and buy it. This one showed Cody becoming a man in his way. Standing up to the bullies was the best thing he could have done, even if he gets in trouble for it, those bullies won't be bothering his again. I enjoyed this and that is without having read the earlier part yet. Well done! :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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This is beautifully written, Brett, and I'm going to have to catch up a bit as I'll be reading it from now on. Is the first book published? If it is I'll go and buy it. This one showed Cody becoming a man in his way. Standing up to the bullies was the best thing he could have done, even if he gets in trouble for it, those bullies won't be bothering his again. I enjoyed this and that is without having read the earlier part yet. Well done! :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 28-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Mary Wakeford
Another excellent chapter, Brent. It appears the drama and suspense is amping up with Schroder seemingly in the wings.
Your descriptions and character references are spot on.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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Another excellent chapter, Brent. It appears the drama and suspense is amping up with Schroder seemingly in the wings.
Your descriptions and character references are spot on.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Appreciate you taking the time to read and to write a review.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from robyn corum
Brett,
A great addition to your story. *smile* I like this small, but brave, little boy. (Though I think he's growing up pretty fast!)
Only a couple of tiny notes, if you please:
1.) "When, Dad? When are we going to get him?" Cody wanted to know."
--> no q mark at the end, please
2.) Built in 1882, the (adobe?) structure featured earth-tones
3.) Cody deafeningly thundered. He vowed, (")I've had it!"
Thanks!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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Brett,
A great addition to your story. *smile* I like this small, but brave, little boy. (Though I think he's growing up pretty fast!)
Only a couple of tiny notes, if you please:
1.) "When, Dad? When are we going to get him?" Cody wanted to know."
--> no q mark at the end, please
2.) Built in 1882, the (adobe?) structure featured earth-tones
3.) Cody deafeningly thundered. He vowed, (")I've had it!"
Thanks!
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Appreciate your comments, support, the review, and the catches.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from emptypage
Is that scenario a stab at reverse psychology aimed to help quell kids' fear, or a social comment aimed at hoverers? Ask Spencer, "Do any of your body parts hurt right now?"
Cody has the language of a child of the 1950s. Other than him sounding like an old man, I like the story.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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Is that scenario a stab at reverse psychology aimed to help quell kids' fear, or a social comment aimed at hoverers? Ask Spencer, "Do any of your body parts hurt right now?"
Cody has the language of a child of the 1950s. Other than him sounding like an old man, I like the story.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story,.
Appreciate you asking the question you did.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
