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Perception of my Reflection

It's not what people see, It's what God sees

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Comment from Mustangpatty1029
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Hi there;
thank you for sharing your entry in the Short Poem contest. Within the context of your words, you have reminded us that we need not look to others for validation. The only judge we need to worry about is Him.

Good luck in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
    Thank you for your review and your Good luck wishes!
Comment from Mike Stevens
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Another fine write, N.B. I'm glad to hear you say it's not what people see, 'cause what they see is a pathetic, mumbling dude who carries on a conversation with his Corn Flakes!

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
    Laughing. Thanks again for a great review.
Comment from c_lucas
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Before you criticize another
Know that they are the apple in the eyes of the mother.
All are Created by God the Father
He always leave room for improvement
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read

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 Comment Written 15-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
    Thank you for your kind review
reply by c_lucas on 16-Aug-2017
    You're welcome. Charlie
Comment from PoemsOfDD
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Nbonner, I like this entry for the Short poem contest. Even though obviously brief, the content is strong and has a sense of truth and depth. Excellent! I do only count 19 syllables though and not the 20 required. However, that is easily rectified. Best of luck in the competition . ~DD

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 Comment Written 15-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
    Thank you for catching that about the 19 syllables. I did rectify that.

    Thanks for the kind review