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Perception of my Reflection

It's not what people see, It's what God sees

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Comment from sharonlshelley
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this is a need little poem quite a powerful message, i liked the picture worked well with the poem, good luck with the poem, good luck in the competition Sharon

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2017
    Thank you for your kind review
Comment from TAB_that's me
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I love what this short poem says:)

Your syllable count is exactly 20 syllables as per the rules.

Good luck!

teresa

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
    Thank you
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Hello NB. Here! Here! We do get caught up sometimes to our own demise lol. Ask me, the kids all think I'm cray-cray lol. Great addition to this contest. Keep writing them out. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
    Thank you for your awesome review and for taking the time to read my poem. Much appreciated
Comment from clsandau
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The few words in your short poem ring so true! We can get caught up in worrying about what others think of us. Really God is the one we need to please. I like your wording and the picture is quite perfect too. Good luck in the contest. Blessings, Carol

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
    Thank you for your kind review and for taking the time to read my poem.
Comment from Poetic Friend
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This is the second poem that I've read of yours that is so impacting and thought-provoking. I agree wholeheartedly with your sentiments in this poem and your author's notes. What really matters in life is God's thoughts, and not man. God placed us on earth to love.

Your poetic voice is so similar to mine. We write on the same subjects. I also wrote on a similar topic. Please feel free to read my poems "Blinded by Society" and "My Best."

Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
    Thank you for your positive feedback and your kind review. I would definitely like to read your work, maybe I can learn something. I need all the help I can get. Thanks again
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written short poem. The opinion of our fellow humans are less important than the opinion of God. Never depend on man to be honest and helpful without expecting payback. Trust in the Lord for true guidance and help.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
    Thank you for your kind words. This poem is personal to me, I really appreciate you taking the time to read. N.B.
Comment from patcelaw
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Sometimes the best poetry is the short poetry such as this. Messages do not have to be wordy to make a valid point. Nicely done. Blessings for the rest of the week. Patricia

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017
    Thank you for your kind review
Comment from His Grayness
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Excellent artwork and presentation, Indeed! the work is obviously very brief as befitting this style of poetry and yet delivers a clear and distinct message that makes it's point very well. Thanks to this author for a short but powerful read! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
    Thank you so much for your kind words and awesome review. I appreciate it greatly.
reply by His Grayness on 15-Aug-2017
    My delight indeed...thanks to YOU! Vance
Comment from Teri7
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This is very well stated with your words what is the truth. God is our only judge. We tend to let people judge us, but it is what God thinks that truly matters. Check this out:
we forget it matters only we He thinks
did you mean to say - we forget it matters only (what) He thinks?

Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
    I have the original poem which is longer and explains a little better. I tried to shorten the poem for the contest. But your right about changing it but I'm not sure it would out for the contest. Thank you for the kind words and your constructive feedback. I appreciate it
Comment from gudbjorg
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An interesting concept I feel, the message fits the picture really well and is beautiful. I like these way of expressing yourself using a picture with a short text that's carefully thought out. Well done.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
    Thank you for your kind review and for taking the time to read.