Sunrise
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Comment from RebelRose
That's a beautiful way to describe this daily/nightly event. Never thought of it in quite that way but you summed it up beautifully in just a few words. Hope all is well with you and I am so glad to find you still here after my lengthy absence.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
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That's a beautiful way to describe this daily/nightly event. Never thought of it in quite that way but you summed it up beautifully in just a few words. Hope all is well with you and I am so glad to find you still here after my lengthy absence.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
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G'day mate, Yep, still here, nearly nine years! Thank you for reading and glad you enjoyed, never written a one-line poem (if you could call it a poem) before. After a big operation last month (hernia repair) I am starting to feel better, how are you going? Love, Kay.
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I'm doing just fine for an old lady. Glad you're getting back on the mend. Take care.
Love,
Patty
Comment from Taffspride
What a simply spectacular one line poem Kay. You have penned an excellent entry for the contest, as well the image you conjure up with your well chosen words in perfect.
Nice pairing with the artwork.
Good luck in the contest
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2017
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What a simply spectacular one line poem Kay. You have penned an excellent entry for the contest, as well the image you conjure up with your well chosen words in perfect.
Nice pairing with the artwork.
Good luck in the contest
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 29-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2017
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Hello Ann, Many thanks for reading my one-liner (never written one before) and thanks again for the six shiny stars. Shalom, Kay XX
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing your entry in the one line poem contest. Within the line, you have introduced us to the father/daughter relationship you see between the sun and moon. Your piece is well presented with the chosen art,
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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thank you for sharing your entry in the one line poem contest. Within the line, you have introduced us to the father/daughter relationship you see between the sun and moon. Your piece is well presented with the chosen art,
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 27-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind review. Best wishes, Kay.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written one line poem. The sun abd the moon make turns to rule the skies. The sun in the day and the moon at night. They usually meet halfway when the one goes to sleep and the other starts to shine.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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A very well-written one line poem. The sun abd the moon make turns to rule the skies. The sun in the day and the moon at night. They usually meet halfway when the one goes to sleep and the other starts to shine.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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Hi Sandra, Thanks so much for your kind review; glad you enjoyed. Cheers, Kay.
Comment from patcelaw
Nicely done Aussie. This is a great entry in the contest. Many blessings for a wonderful weekend coming up for you. The weather here is humid as we are in our rainy season of the year and it is hoot as well so makes it a bit uncomfortable. Patricia
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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Nicely done Aussie. This is a great entry in the contest. Many blessings for a wonderful weekend coming up for you. The weather here is humid as we are in our rainy season of the year and it is hoot as well so makes it a bit uncomfortable. Patricia
Comment Written 27-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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Hi Patricia, Thanks so much for your kind review. We are in winter here, we don't experience cold like America because we are in the sub-tropics. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Aussie, this is a great little One Line Poem. In just a few words you have done a grand job of describing the Sunrise in such a beautiful and poetic way. Well done and best of luck in the competition. ~DD
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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Aussie, this is a great little One Line Poem. In just a few words you have done a grand job of describing the Sunrise in such a beautiful and poetic way. Well done and best of luck in the competition. ~DD
Comment Written 27-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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Hello DD, Thanks so much for reading, glad you enjoyed. Cheers, Kay. XX
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your one line poem "Sunrise". You chose a beautiful picture for what we take for granted every day.
All the best in the contest.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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I enjoyed reading your one line poem "Sunrise". You chose a beautiful picture for what we take for granted every day.
All the best in the contest.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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Hello friend, Thanks so much for reading and glad you liked the one-liner! Cheers, Kay.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from country ranch writer
Beautiful sunset as the sun goes down over the area. The moon coming to say goodnight across the water as it is his turn to rise up and take his turn to watch.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Beautiful sunset as the sun goes down over the area. The moon coming to say goodnight across the water as it is his turn to rise up and take his turn to watch.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Hello my friend, Thanks so much for reading; glad you liked the one-liner! LOL Kay XXX
Comment from artemis53
What a beautiful sentiment, Kate. I never thought of it in that way under any circumstance so I thank you for the glimmer of light you have provided me.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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What a beautiful sentiment, Kate. I never thought of it in that way under any circumstance so I thank you for the glimmer of light you have provided me.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Hello from Oz! Thanks for dropping by and reading. Glad you liked it. Love, Kay.
Comment from RodG
Superb pairing of photo and poem. We can easily visualize that "kiss" as daughter moon retires to her bed. Your one-liner has mythical overtones in your allusions to "father" and "daughter." Nicely done.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Superb pairing of photo and poem. We can easily visualize that "kiss" as daughter moon retires to her bed. Your one-liner has mythical overtones in your allusions to "father" and "daughter." Nicely done.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Hello RodG, Thanks for dropping in and glad you liked the one-liner! Cheers, Kay.
