Muse in Hybernation
A lune23 total reviews
Comment from Janilou
Wonderful Lune. Your muse wasn't hibernating! She went to Jirvania, the magical world where our Muses go to harvest the "story" and "poem" pearls where our ideas grow. Then they bring them back to us and voila! A new poem is born! LOL
(I just completed a book called 'Julu' that explores this concept. ;-)
Your writing is delightful!
All the best,
Jan
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Wonderful Lune. Your muse wasn't hibernating! She went to Jirvania, the magical world where our Muses go to harvest the "story" and "poem" pearls where our ideas grow. Then they bring them back to us and voila! A new poem is born! LOL
(I just completed a book called 'Julu' that explores this concept. ;-)
Your writing is delightful!
All the best,
Jan
Comment Written 18-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Hi Jan, Thanks for reading my muse poem .Sometimes my muse takes off and I go quiet then she returns with many words to write I often have so many in my head but need to write them down before I forget the thread. Is your book on line? Glad tou like my writing Cheers Christine
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Chrissy710, I'm a bit late on my picture challenge poem reviewing and posting and noticed you haven't written one so thought I'd pop in to have a browse. I must say the picture you have used on this Lune piece is fantastic as is the 5-3-5. Few words but one many writers can relate to. Adding a touch of alliteration for the middle line works really well. An excellent read! ~DD
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Chrissy710, I'm a bit late on my picture challenge poem reviewing and posting and noticed you haven't written one so thought I'd pop in to have a browse. I must say the picture you have used on this Lune piece is fantastic as is the 5-3-5. Few words but one many writers can relate to. Adding a touch of alliteration for the middle line works really well. An excellent read! ~DD
Comment Written 18-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Hi DD, Thanks so much for your review and yes I have been very slack of late and havent posted for a while I will get back though and read everyones great work Nice to hear from you Many Cheers Christine
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Hello Christine, good to hear from you. I relate to slack so no sweat. I look forward to reading more of your work. :-) ~DD
Comment from BeasPeas
Muse in hibernation, eh? I think we all go through that from time to time. Therefore we drop out and everyone (hopefully) misses us--soon to be over it. Your lune is excellent. Image is gorgeous. Much luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Muse in hibernation, eh? I think we all go through that from time to time. Therefore we drop out and everyone (hopefully) misses us--soon to be over it. Your lune is excellent. Image is gorgeous. Much luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Hi Marilyn, Sorry for the late reply and Thanks for your review I think my muse is still in hybernation I don't seem to get any vibes lately But wil get back soon. I am on holidays at the moment somwhere warm for a few days so maybe this will get me going. Thanks again and catch up soon Cheers Christine
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Very descriptive in few words giving the reader a sense of winter blues and the all consuming hiding away from it, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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Very descriptive in few words giving the reader a sense of winter blues and the all consuming hiding away from it, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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Hi Dolly. Thanks for your read and review Winter not my best time but it brought me a 3 rd in the comtest a bonus Cheers Christine xx
Comment from Bill Schott
This lune, Muse in Hibernation, connects the cold-effected Muse with the lack of output, somewhere, in your poetry world.
Do they spell hibernating with a Y in Australia? Happy day.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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This lune, Muse in Hibernation, connects the cold-effected Muse with the lack of output, somewhere, in your poetry world.
Do they spell hibernating with a Y in Australia? Happy day.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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Hi Bill, Yes I think so I will check though LOL blame the Winter blues. LOL Thanks for your review and This Lune just seemed to suit my mood. Cheers Christine
Comment from Rasmine
This is how I'm feeling -- well, I feel sick that is why I'm not writing as much as I could. Hard to write when you are constantly exposed to nasty second-hand smoke in a non-smoking apartment building. Hope you find your muse!
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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This is how I'm feeling -- well, I feel sick that is why I'm not writing as much as I could. Hard to write when you are constantly exposed to nasty second-hand smoke in a non-smoking apartment building. Hope you find your muse!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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Hi Rasmine, Oh I am pleased some else feels the same I don't do Winter well I love the hot weather and live in a cold climate Muse wil appear soon . We have a smoke free hospital so No problems with the smoke not like when I trained in nursing we all smoked ( gave up 30 years ago , husband still smokes but he goes outside never indoors ) Cheers for your support. sending a hug
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing your lune for the contest. Your presentation and well formed words do a good job of portraying the feelings we have when our muse takes a rest.
Great presentation and structure of the 5-3-5 format.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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thank you for sharing your lune for the contest. Your presentation and well formed words do a good job of portraying the feelings we have when our muse takes a rest.
Great presentation and structure of the 5-3-5 format.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 27-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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Hi Patty, Thanks for reading my lune and sending me a review iDo not like the cold or Winter so often get lazy and a bit out of sorts but I do apreciate your support and it made 3rd place so that was good Cheers Christine
Comment from Heather Knight
Funny! I used this picture for one of my poems a long time ago... I don't even remember what the poem was about.
Our muses hibernate from time to time, even in the summer. I guess it happens to us all.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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Funny! I used this picture for one of my poems a long time ago... I don't even remember what the poem was about.
Our muses hibernate from time to time, even in the summer. I guess it happens to us all.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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Hi Maria, Thanks for your review and I liked the image also and thought it fitted my words nicely and yes my Muse is absent in Winter LOL. FS always draws me back in So nice to hear from you Cheers Christine
Comment from pipersfancy
I guess it happens to us all - the weather turns, or we're under the weather, or for any number of other reasons... sometimes that Muse is simply nowhere to be found!
I enjoyed this lune - good luck with the contest,
pf
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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I guess it happens to us all - the weather turns, or we're under the weather, or for any number of other reasons... sometimes that Muse is simply nowhere to be found!
I enjoyed this lune - good luck with the contest,
pf
Comment Written 27-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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Hi pf, Thanks for resding and your comments I suffer in the Winter with the cant be botheres LOL but thought this contest wpuld help release my muse and I gained a third place with this so bonus hey Cheers Christine
Comment from Justin Chopin
Very creative way of speaking about creative stagnation. The idea of your muse taking a long rest in some ethereal palace while you struggle with your " winter woes" anxious about coming up with any kind of poetry is a very strong sentiment which I can absolutely relate too. Well done with this piece.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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Very creative way of speaking about creative stagnation. The idea of your muse taking a long rest in some ethereal palace while you struggle with your " winter woes" anxious about coming up with any kind of poetry is a very strong sentiment which I can absolutely relate too. Well done with this piece.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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Hi Justin, Thanks for ypur great comments and i find Winter gives me issues with motivation not a fan I love the hot weather and always feel more alive and creative, A bit of fun though with this Lune and it made a 3rd place so that lifted my spirits. Cheers Christine
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You're welcome Chrissy.
